Nov. 4th, 2007

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back by popular demand. don't say I never gave you nuffin.

I actually really love this chapter, haha. I feel kind of uncertain and pissy about the ending for this fic, which is why I haven't coughed it up, and I kind of facepalm over how very much I bastardized Liam's personality in order to make him different from the other two. but whatever. this chapter makes me snicker.

I started to do a "previously on," but it's been so long that I couldn't decide what excerpt would be most helpful. so to refresh your memory, the last chapter was the one where Angel fucked Angelus, and it was all....grrr and violent and yum. mmkay?

Title: Wayward Boys
Author: Mel ([livejournal.com profile] thatotherperv)
Pairing: Angelus/Liam/Angel. human AU tripletcest
Rating: NC-17 for sure…
Summary: human AU. Angelus is determined to get both of his brothers back into his bed, where they belong.
Warnings: uh…incest, obviously. Can’t stress that enough. Some of the flashbacks deal with *early experimentation*. At some point, there will be bondage. And uh, angst. If I have to put additional warnings up later, I will by the chapter.
Disclaimer: these characters are sooo not mine. if they were, there really would have been three of them.

Previous parts here

in which Angel is exhausted and cranky )
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Note that this is mostly to make myself feel better, and as though reading that book weren’t a total waste of my time.  This post was an exercise in reverse-engineering a sloppily-written book to try to learn something.  And also, to vent my spleen about the sloppiness.

please also note that this post contains explicit spoilers for the book, but I don't recommend you read it anyway, so....

 

 
More and more now, when I read commercial / published literature, I think to myself, god, can’t these people find a good beta reader? 

Seriously, we have a good thing going here, folks, if we want to take advantage of it.  you can *find* people not only to edit in the typo-catching sense, but someone to tell you what’s believable, what reads poorly, and where you need a reality check.  That is *valuable*.

Dude, Cormac McCarthy needs this kind of beta-reader, stat.  or at least someone who’s not an ass-kisser.  But I guess when you’re a recluse, that kind of thing is hard to come by.

 

 

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