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ok, I know some folks have been waiting for this a long time...like...August. *g* sorry to leave you in the lurch so long, but the original plan was to finish writing the fic. clearly, that's not happening in a hurry now that school is back in progress, so I'm going to post what I have written SLOWLY (read: a chapter every couple weeks) to give myself time to catch up, to avoid leaving you in the lurch again. that means chapter 5 will be posted in 2-3 weeks, best I can tell.

and remember, feedback in the hand is worth 2 in the bush. or something. definitely more productive-making than poking. ;)

there's a bit of a review under the cut for those of you *without* the memory of an elephant.

Title: Wayward Boys
Author: Mel ([livejournal.com profile] btvslover82
Pairing: Angelus/Liam/Angel (you heard me, it’s tripletcest!). human AU
Rating: NC-17 for sure…
Summary: human AU. Angelus is determined to get both of his brothers back into his bed, where they belong.
Warnings: uh…incest, obviously. Can’t stress that enough. Some of the flashbacks deal with *early experimentation*. At some point, there will be bondage. And uh, angst. If I have to put additional warnings up later, I will by the chapter.
Disclaimer: these characters are sooo not mine. if they were, they would have been doing naughty things all along.

**An extra cover-my-ass warning: this fic deals with *human AU incest* among triplets. Although the boys are 22 in the majority of the fic, there is at least one flashback, maybe more, dealing with underage sex. In one, they are quite young (after puberty but not by much), and it is more for expository purposes than anything, but it is graphic. If you think this will bother you, run away now**

previous parts of this dirty little tale are found here



A/N: to review, when last we left the boys, Liam tried to blow Angel and got rebuffed in a very rude and painful manner. he fell asleep in Angelus' bed trying to comfort himself, and when Angelus found out what had happened, there was much drama and threat of face-bashing. this chapter occurs that same day. though if I were you, I'd have to go back and read the whole thing over, cuz it's been so damn long.

Chapter 4

“Oh. Oh, Angelus.”

Liam’s body squirmed as Angelus’ mouth slid and twisted around his cock, trapped beneath Angelus’ gently restraining hands. Liam breathed hard in little lusty prayers. Angelus could smell the whiskey on his breath from here, but for once, the drink was a mere formality. Liam had needed this union after Angel’s rejection. He’d been begging for it silently all day, with innocent but provocative little gestures that he must know inflamed Angelus’ desire to drive himself into that sweet body.

And yet, Liam still needed the booze as an excuse…as a scapegoat for his own actions. It rankled at Angelus, but he didn’t push the matter. Liam had already been traumatized enough today already.

Angelus rolled Liam’s thighs up, opening his body. When he teased his tongue against the edge of Liam’s hole, Liam’s body seized up in a sharp cry. Liam was looking down at him, eyes hazy with lust and drunkenness. Desperate. Little Liam, always so eager for attention. For affection.

Angel was such a prick for denying him. And a fool, as well.

Angelus’ tongue stabbed through the shy aperture of Liam’s body, and Liam began to pant and sweat at the slick muscle thrusting against his sensitive tissue.

“Ah! Ah, fuck…’Gelus…love you. Love you so much.”

Angelus rolled his eyes. His brother was such a sentimental fool when he was intoxicated. Quick to show his soft underbelly, which he had hidden years ago with his good-natured carousing. His brothers were the only ones to be shown Liam’s vulnerability any more. It was the reason Angelus was able to get Liam to spread for him when he was in his cups…Liam missed the way that it used to be. When they were all partners in criminal pleasure.

Liam missed Angel too, but that was going to take some more doing. That boy was in denial, capital D. Angelus wasn’t willing to wait forever though—and if he made Liam cry a little louder than was prudent when Angel was home, and if it was only eight in the evening when Angel was sure to be awake, then all the better. Angelus’ anger made him strategically reckless.

When Angelus was finished preparing Liam with a searching tongue and deft fingers, he sank inside, reveling in the view. Liam’s thick thighs were pulled back to frame his well-muscled torso. He had just a tiny bit of a beer gut these days, but it was still solid muscle underneath, and anyway, it was true what they said about more cushion. Liam’s cock curved, hard and eager, against his belly, and his sack hung full above where he was penetrated.

It didn’t hurt that Liam’s goods were the same as Angelus’ own. What a fuckin’ head trip. How the hell Angel could push this away in the name of morals was beyond him.

Liam was looking up at him, chewing on his lip even though his face was slack with pleasure. Fucking pansy-ass Angel had made their little brother feel bad about himself. Angelus leaned down and plied him with a few strategically soft kisses, but he couldn’t stop the hunger from slipping through as his hips began to twitch, instinctively trying to possess.

Angelus braced himself up and aimed one stabbing thrust at Liam’s prostate.

“Gus!” Liam gasped.

Fuck. Angelus decided to just let the name go this time. Liam’d had a rough day. He started pumping roughly into Liam’s squeezing heat, and Liam whimpered.

“Fuck, baby, you like that?” Angelus worked them up to a nice steady pace. Hell yeah.

Liam moaned. “Yeah, Gus…God!”

“Yeah, baby, I know what you need, don’t I?”

Liam nodded, panting, and in the relative silence, Angelus heard something odd. Something that gave him pause.

Literally. And Liam didn’t like that at all, the little slut, and began to shift restlessly beneath him. “’Gelus—” Angelus pushed a finger over Liam’s lips. The sound in the hallway stopped abruptly, but it was too late.

Angelus knew what it was. And who.

Well, if Angel was going to stand in the hallway, hiding behind the door while he jacked off to the sound of them fucking, then they were going to give him a show.

Angelus started fucking Liam again so abruptly and with such fervor that Liam cried out, startled. He wondered if any amount of crying from Liam would bring Angel in to the ‘rescue.’ Probably not. He’d stand out there and crank himself raw, but he’d die before he let himself be known. Angel was a real piece of work.

“Aww, fuck, Liam. So good, baby. You like it when I fuck you?”

Liam’s body jarred with the force of Angelus’ attention, the sound of their bodies smacking together clearly audible. “Yeah,” he murmured.

“Louder, Lee. Wanna hear what I do to you. Are you my boy?”

Liam moaned and arched when Angelus took hold of his cock. “Yeah, Gus…yours. Fuck me.”

Angelus grinned as he imagined Angel’s face on the other side of that door. He let his other hand card through Liam’s hair, and then tugged, just hard enough to make Liam moan his name. His whole name.

“You’re such a little slut for me, Liam. Such a good boy. Spread for me anytime I want, don’t you?”

Liam made weak affirmative noises, and Angelus pounded forward into his body, on the verge of too hard. Angelus’ eyes rolled back, so turned on by his own game—the dirty words and the thought of Angel on the other side of that door, listening. Listening as he stripped his own cock, feeling dirty and ill but so turned on he couldn’t walk away….

Fuck!” Angelus’ own state of arousal rocketed at the image, and without anticipating it, he shot his load inside of Liam, blind for a moment in the face of it, and then he was withdrawing to crouch over Liam, pulling his brother off roughly and thrusting his fingers inside Liam’s hole on his own jizz to massage at that magic spot. To make Liam howl like he wanted him to.

Liam’s face scrunched with the coming orgasm, panting desperately, and then his hips pumped upwards and he spurted against the tan skin of his own belly and chest, a shaky wordless animal moan ripped from his chest.

Angelus collapsed back on the bed besides Liam, who was too woozy now to be of any use. He listened carefully and was rewarded by a small choked sound from the hallway. It wasn’t hard to imagine Angel’s mortification at his own actions—he was probably self-flagellating before he’d even finished shooting his load. When Angelus heard the rapid retreat of footsteps confirming his suspicion, it only made him grin wider.

One step closer, and it hadn’t even required extra effort on his part.

This was gonna be fun.

~*~*~*~

Angelus started fucking Liam raw—at all hours of the day, but only when Angel was home. He was laying the bait, setting a trap. A net that would encircle their guilt-ridden brother, leaving him bound and tangled and helpless before he could realize just how ensnared he really was.

It was fun. Because Angel took the bait now, every time.

Most of the time, they still fucked in Liam’s room. Angelus took to narrating their positions, Liam’s reactions and how hot Liam made him. Sometimes it was raunchy. He called Liam an enthusiastic little cocksucker, a naughty little slut, his good little boy.

But they’d need honey to catch Angel as well, so when Angelus let himself be more tender with their little brother, he verbalized that as well. Called Liam by sweet endearments and even told him that he loved him, that no one made him feel this good, this wanted. Angelus hoped—knew—that those times in particular brought Angel a wash of bitter loneliness that would drive him back into their arms. Eventually.

The bonus was, Liam flowered under Angelus’ attentions, thoroughly oblivious to their audience. He never objected now, when Angelus grabbed him by his cock and took him for a ride. Liam self-medicated with booze in smaller and smaller doses. A bottle was always at the ready, but it was becoming more of a formality than anything. A little something to dull his residual nerves…his lingering shame.

They’d be dispatching of that shortly, Angelus decided. He wanted Liam clear-eyed and hot for him, not bleary and numb, and now it seemed that it might be plausible to get him naked while sober. Soon.

A few weeks after Angel had first heard them fucking, Angelus decided to shake it up a little. He started jumping Liam in other rooms of the house, making it loud enough that Angel would hear them well before he might walk in on them. It was too soon for that. But Angelus wanted to startle Angel, to make him want them more urgently.

So he bent Liam over the kitchen table and gave him a good, hard, loud seeing to. And they fucked in the office, the living room, the shower—even in their parents rarely-used suite. Angelus coaxed Liam into giving him head on the sofa in the entertainment room, where Angel had rejected the same offer.

Angel always found them, like clockwork. Angelus imagined him again and again, standing in the hall, shifting from foot to foot nervously while he pulled at his own cock. Face flushed, lip plumped from biting it with apprehension.

It was almost time. All Angelus needed was to find a way to get Angel a little more…in the moment.

on to Chapter 5, in which Angel cracks

Date: 2007-01-13 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
oh god.

so, i've read this before, but it's just so... i mean, three angels. i just can't... i just... i have to go.

*runs*

Date: 2007-01-13 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*snickers* glad it held up to a second reading ;)

Date: 2007-01-13 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampsarecool.livejournal.com
*sigh* thanks for updating. That was really fantastic hun.

Date: 2007-01-13 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
you're quite welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2007-01-13 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikesgurl.livejournal.com
Eeep! I'm so excited! I haven't even read it yet... I just had to squee first! And then I got all distracted when you started saying something about my hand in your bush, or something...

Runs off to read now *g*

Date: 2007-01-13 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*basks in the squee-age*

Date: 2007-01-13 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyghtpet.livejournal.com
*mewls and collapses*
Good god, I can't feel my knees.
That....that....oh god Liam moaning and being the perfect little whore and and and Angelus loving him and manipulating him all at the same time and and Angel just GAH!
*is a mute mute lil perv*

Date: 2007-01-13 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
can't feel your knees, eh? what have YOU been doing. *snerk*

gah Liam is the perfect little whore, isn't he? bzzzzz. and Angelus is more of a softie for Liam than he really wants to admit.

lmao. mute. that I don't believe. perv, definitely ;)

Date: 2007-01-13 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denied-heaven.livejournal.com
unnnghh
yeah
*swallows*
i really reaallyyy love angelus in this haha, gawd
so yum
*cuddles up liam so hard*
i read this the moment you posted but i had to take a moment to cool me brain down before commenting
*fans* whew
*loves*

Date: 2007-01-13 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
haha I'm glad you love my Angelus here! he's a little different, but he's human and they're family so I think it's appropriate.

and also hot. lmao

Liam is such a sweetie. I feel like he wasn't this soft in canon, but jesus I had to do *something* to make him distinct. three personalities from one person is hard, especially when we know nothing about Liam really.

DAMN!!!!!!

Date: 2007-01-13 04:32 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Damn girl!!!!!! That was so fecking Hot!!!!!!

and double damn! I'm SO going to be useless at work now that you've got me totally and obsessivly fantasising about those beautiful boys all hot, musculed and sweaty going at it all over the house. WHEW!!!

SOOOOOOOOO looking forward to more!!!!!

Re: DAMN!!!!!!

Date: 2007-01-13 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol, glad you enjoyed it! even and especially if I did make you useless :D

obsessivly fantasising about those beautiful boys all hot, musculed and sweaty going at it all over the house. WHEW!!!
I can think of far far worse fates ;)

Date: 2007-01-13 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikesgurl.livejournal.com
Oh yeah, now *that's* what I'm talkin' about!! Damn, girl! Now all I can think about is Angelus taking Liam over the kitchen table. Talk about a great mental image! I'm absolutely dying to see that eventual threesome. I don't know how you always mange to hit all my buttons, but rest assured that you have once again succeeded. Bravo!

Date: 2007-01-13 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hahah so glad to provide lovely imagery for the spank bank uh...the late-night hours. lol.

I don't know how you always mange to hit all my buttons, but rest assured that you have once again succeeded. Bravo!
I'm so glad! thank you. *hugs*

Date: 2007-01-13 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
*makes strangled noise*

Date: 2007-01-13 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*resuscitates*

Date: 2007-01-13 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaffiotte.livejournal.com
OKay. It obviously would be too easy to tell you "great, more".
Aaaand much feedback=not so much to wait for the next.
So.
Feedback.
oh wait.
First goes
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE (I need an icon)
YOu should've seen my face when I saw "chapter 4".
I just... shut off. Like a computer bug or something. You know, like those mac computers who go "couac couac" when something's wrong? The annoying sound? that's what happenned in my head.
Then I was all like "wait. I know this story. This update is very important... It's... It's... GAAAH!!8 comments already! MIssed first comment!! Why did I oversleep???I could’ve been first comment !!"
Now then I chuckled at
1)your warning. Your warnings (aren’t those meant to warn people off ??) always manage to drag me into stories. That’s how I got into won’t back down(pause. Pomp and march of circumstance, 1. End of pause)
2)that part on «previously on wayward boys ». Heehee. Seriously, I read those once a week. I could quote it (as the other boy went crossed eyed to follow the motion/yeah liam you’re a real good boy/he knew they were thirteen, just as much as he knew this was a dreamokay let’s stop. I see a little silhouetto of a man…) So, hehe, could have skipped that part. Didn’t, because, come on, you wrote it, and even more it’s on wayward boys.

Now ! Story !

He’d been begging for it silently all day, with innocent but provocative little gestures that he must know inflamed Angelus’ desire to drive himself into that sweet body.
Oooh that’s so sweet !! All upset about angel (grr, bad angel !!)…
I’m glad (Just wrote I’m clad…hem nevermind) that Angelus *finally* took care of Liam. Part of what upset me most in chapter 3 was the lack of comfort 


It rankled at Angelus, but he didn’t push the matter. Liam had already been traumatized enough today already.
Now, see, that’s what I’m talking about. Niiice Angelus. Caring Angelus. But not showing, ‘cuz that’d be too easy. Yup.

What a fuckin’ head trip. and I can so imagine him thinking that too ! That is so him ! Such ego…

“Gus!” Liam gasped.

Fuck. Angelus decided to just let the name go this time. Liam’d had a rough day.
Anda gain with the sweetness ! I love you !! I love them ! I can’t wait two weeks !! but then again I didn’t think I could wait until december, and I did more than that…

Literally. And Liam didn’t like that at all, the little slut, and began to shift restlessly beneath him. Oh that was so cool lol…At first I hadn’t gotten it, I thought that Liam had also heard the noise and was trying to run away or something.
But, oh well, alcohol makes you deaf. Good to know ^^

“Fuck!” Angelus’ own state of arousal rocketed at the image he’s a riot that one. Coming too soon because the idea of manipulating angel gets him off. I love him !! *g*

The bonus was, Liam flowered under Angelus’ attentions, thoroughly oblivious to their audience. ooooh and that’s soooo sweet. Really. He’s my favorite. So cute. So needing to be loved. I’m glad he’s getting that *stupid grin*

Angelus coaxed Liam into giving him head on the sofa in the entertainment room, where Angel had rejected the same offer. and that’s so cool. So Angelus too. Although I can’t believe how Liam would accept doing that…

Conclusion : You just made me
1)read the chapter
2)re-read the chapter
3)read the whole thing
4)rereread the chapter
5)comment while quoting the chapter.
I nearly quoted the first parts, but I figure this comment’s already long enough lol.

Gah, this was so hot. My day is totally made.
I’ll comment, and then I’ll read it once more.
Can’t hurt, and I might have forgotten something cool.
Then I’ll read it backwards.
Yup.

THANK YOUUUU !!! :D

Date: 2007-01-13 10:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toiffag.livejournal.com
oh yeah I remember something else.
You did promise us angst with chapter 5.
So now I know chapter 4, worried.


and very waiting for that threesome with spike...
wondering where spike'll end up. Sandwiched? Oh well^^ different concerns.

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Date: 2007-01-13 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiny-n-new.livejournal.com
*spazzes* Squee! Update! Oh god, so hot! Now all I can sse is Angelus taking Liam over the kitchen table. I don't think I've mentioned enough how much I love this story, and Angel-on-Angel(-on-Liam!) action in general. My day is complete now. *patiently waits for chapter 5*

Random sidenote: My cat was staring very intently at the computer as I was reading this, and now he is purring. Apparently, he likes the porn also. Who knew?

Date: 2007-01-13 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*snickers* that seems to be a popular image. so glad you enjoyed it!

My day is complete now. *patiently waits for chapter 5*
*snickers*
*pets you*

and lmfao on the cat. not only is your cat a perv...he's gay!

Date: 2007-01-13 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uncouthkitten.livejournal.com
Bloody hell, my kink meter has just exploded, quick hand me the emergency wet towel. Don't know how on earth I missed this before but I won't be missing it again. On a more somber note, I hope that you appreciate that inducing attacks of spontaneous drooling in persons leaning over electrical equipment is not a clever thing to do. May have to market a 2 gallon plastic catcher bib before the next chapter. Yuk, made myself feel queasy. Should have stuck to "Great story - more please".

Date: 2007-01-13 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hahaha
*repairs your kink meter*

lol, well you know, if you'd seen it before I would have kept you waiting for 6 months, so it might be better you didn't notice it till now.

you have a couple weeks to get yourself that bib. lmao. glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2007-01-13 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebonypsyche.livejournal.com
I have to go out and deal with people later and now the only thing I'm going to be thinking about is this hotdirtywhorishwrongness.

Thank goodness other wise I might actually be focused on the task at hand....*goes off to think about the hotness*

Date: 2007-01-13 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
when someone asks you why you're smiling, you *really* won't be able to tell them. lmao.

glad I could brighten your day. thanks!

Date: 2007-01-13 06:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com
*hiding eyes* I haven't read the other parts yet, so I'm bookmarking the whole thing, but WOW, triplets? That's one I haven't run into before! *gives you a special ribbon for naughtiness*

Date: 2007-01-13 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*wears the ribbon with pride*

lol. yeah. I posted the first three parts in August for Autumn of Angel. I'd been thinking about how nobody ever wrote Angel incest fic like they write spike/william twincest. and I like spilliam, but I don't love William the way that I love Spike, and I definitely don't love him the same way I love all three of Angel's "personalities". I was like, how come nobody writes angel tripletcest, that would be hot.

and so a fic was born :)

Date: 2007-01-13 09:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] laisserais
hooray for more tripletcest! guh. Angel's on the brink, we've gotta tip him over! such a hot hunk of a chapter. lordy! and yet, you still are furthering the character development. what's up with that? Liam's slowly drying out, Angelus is slowly taking other people's opinions into consideration (well, Liam's at least), and Angel's slowly... getting blisters.

totally dug this! particularly: “You’re such a little slut for me, Liam. Such a good boy. Spread for me anytime I want, don’t you?” *ahem*

Date: 2007-01-13 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol. hooray for tripletcest, indeed :)

oh, we'll push him over. he'll be scrabbling at the cliff, but then we'll step on his fingers :D don't you worry about that.

you still are furthering the character development. what's up with that?
*snickers* someone stuck character development in my porn!
Angel's slowly... getting blisters.
*SNERK*

glad you enjoyed it.

*grflble*

Date: 2007-01-14 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incasink.livejournal.com
Okay so I started reading this, and then went back and read chapter 3... and then went back and read through again and was in a state of hot bother by the time I got here.

Deep thought comment:
I like the idea that Angelus is wanting to own both Liam and Angel and also, that he is SO the one in control? He holds this allure to both Liam and Angel...
Well they all have a hold over each other, but Angelus maybe, is the only one who exerts this hold. Angel hides and Liam is led, but Angelus is the only one, you know, setting everything up.
ALSO
Liam calls him by a infantalised version of his name, which sorta... magnifies the manipulating part of Angelus (comparing innocent with *not* innocent), and also suggests to me that Liam the innocent, is, in his mind, connecting with that part of himself in Angelus.
Am I getting too crazy here?
Angelus contains parts of Liam and thinky Angel, Liam contains the watered down conscience of Angel and contains not just the fleshy hard physical parts of Angelus, (*chortle*) but the willingness to err on the naughty side easily, and Angel contains the (though weaker) innocence of Liam and the darker part of Angelus (wanting to um, *do* Liam)

It makes me wonder, who would be on top (not just position) if Angel and Angelus went at it? Who would be in control? That would speak volumes to me.

Other part of the comment:

*GRFLBLE*

And Liam didn’t like that at all, the little slut, and began to shift restlessly beneath him.


Angelus collapsed back on the bed besides Liam, who was too woozy now to be of any use. He listened carefully and was rewarded by a small choked sound from the hallway. It wasn’t hard to imagined Angel’s mortification at his own actions—



Angelus hoped—knew—that those times in particular brought Angel a wash of bitter loneliness that would drive him back into their arms. Eventually.

The bonus was, Liam flowered under Angelus’ attentions, thoroughly oblivious to their audience.


I THINK I LIKE ANGELUS' PARTS MOST OF ALL

Re: *grflble*

Date: 2007-01-14 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
have I mentioned that I loved you yet today? :D

glad to make you glurble. Angelus is particularly fun because he's just so...manipulative :D evil in a sort of good-willed way. compared to canon, anyway.

Well they all have a hold over each other, but Angelus maybe, is the only one who exerts this hold. Angel hides and Liam is led, but Angelus is the only one, you know, setting everything up.
totally! Angelus is the only one kind of unflinchingly admitting what they all want. as for who would top, Angel or Angelus. I just wrote that chapter today, and I'm soooo not telling. lmfao. *is evil and excited*

Liam calls him by a infantalised version of his name, which sorta... magnifies the manipulating part of Angelus (comparing innocent with *not* innocent), and also suggests to me that Liam the innocent, is, in his mind, connecting with that part of himself in Angelus.
Am I getting too crazy here?

never crazy! I love that. yeah, Liam sees the...innocent (hard to apply that word to him, haha) part of Angelus. he really leans his memory heavily on how things used to be between them. he remembers when Angelus was a little more shiny, and he is projecting a bit.

I love what you said about them all having parts of each other. because Angel's three "personalities" are so much more integrated than I ever realized until I started writing this. they're nearly impossible to separate, and I like that I wasn't able to. I like those echoes. I'm glad you enjoy them as well. they're kind of...they really do balance each other out. I think if two of the three were to try to make it work without all three, there would be serious dysfunction. see: Angelus' domination of Liam. *snickerS*

thanks for the great fb.

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the fat one, each time they use it.

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Date: 2007-01-14 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jans-intentions.livejournal.com
whoo hoo! This is so hot, love. I had forgotten it. I love your evil Angelus. I can't wait to see the evil coils of his plan.

Date: 2007-01-14 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
glad you enjoyed it upon reread :D

angelus is lovely. and he's got big plans ;)

Date: 2007-01-14 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackdesires-87.livejournal.com
it's back! SQWEEEEEEE!!!!! and its sooo gooooood...

hmmmmmm three angels, oh boy , i sence a cold shower coming on...or maybe its bed time because luv? that was so very very hot

*hugs you enthusiasticaly and scurries off to do the affor mentioned shower*

Date: 2007-01-14 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
:D glad I could...ahem...do it for you. lmao. I personally second the fact that three angels are squee-worthy. obviously :)

Date: 2007-01-15 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spankspike.livejournal.com
Though I'm behind on your updates of "Covet Thy Neighbor" and "Sin Eater", you see where I've immediately run with my limited reading time.

I actually had to go back and re-read the previous chapters because it's been so long. *glares, but fully expects you to do the same when I finally update "Lap Dance" and "A Price Above Rubies"* And it was such a chore - what with all the stopping to make sure I hadn't run out of batteries. *winks*

Oh yes, this was what I've been waiting for. And now I'll be sweating out the wait for more. The thought of Angelus fucking Liam all over the house while Angel stands just outside spanking it - guh! Come one Angel, join in - you know you want to!

Date: 2007-01-15 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
:D I can understand your priority. I'm behind on everything too, like I havent read your uh thing you posted the other day yet.

flattered you went back and reread the other three, with your limited reading time *smooches and ignores your glare cuz I have one word for you...whorefic ;)*

lmao. *sends you a lifetime supply of double-A*

oh, he sooo does, baby. he so does. update this time will obviously be sooner than the last one. I have through chapter 9 written, but I'd rather ration them out till I'm done with all 12, so as to keep yall from having to wait for ages again. which is hard for me, because I have no impulse control and I wanna post it all now now now.

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Date: 2007-01-16 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emu-stand-bi.livejournal.com
It was almost time. All Angelus needed was to find a way to get Angel a little more…in the moment.

This line made me so excited. Can't wait for this 'in the moment' thing to happen.

I felt kinda bad for Angel though...even if he thinks it's wrong...he must be feeling left out.

Date: 2007-01-16 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*giggles evilly cuz of what she knows*

that's actually all I can say to this piece of fb. :) I'm glad you are enjoying this! more soonish.

Wayward Boys Ch 4

Date: 2007-01-22 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com
You are just cranking up the hotness! Angelus/Liam and a voyeuristic Angel. Ummmmmmm :-)

Minor comment:
There's a 'It wasn’t hard to imagined' which should be 'It wasn’t hard to imagine'
There's a 'They’d be dispatching of that shortly' which I think should be 'They’d be dispensing with that shortly'

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Date: 2007-01-22 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yeah I thought it was a rather hot concept myself :) glad you like it!

Date: 2007-04-15 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
Wow. . . That was just wow.

Having Angel listening to the other two was just so incredibly hot. I can't wait to see what the next part of Angelus' plan is.

Date: 2007-04-16 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
heee, I'm glad you liked that bit of kink :)

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Date: 2007-11-06 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toobusy2write.livejournal.com
Good God, woman. That was.... Just.... Fuck I love Angelus in this. He's so manipulative, but in a for-the-good-of-getting-the-incest-back kind of way, and that *really* shouldn't be a good thing, but it so is, haha.

And Liam, being such a good little whore for him. *cough* Um, yeah. Really loved that.

And Angel creeping around listening in and jerking himself off because he just can't help himself? GUH

Wish I had some deep, meaningful fb for you, but um, yeah, I think blew a circuit reading this, lmao.

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