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As of this posting (5 chapters are required), this fic is nom’d at Fang Fetish. Thank you so much for whoever did that! it’s up for threesomes, best sex, and best AR



Title: Hostage
Author: Author: Mel ([livejournal.com profile] thatotherperv formerly btvslover82)
Pairing: Angelus/Dawn/evil!Spike
Rating: NC-17
Summary: When Angelus and Spike come to Sunnydale to kill the slayer, they find more interesting prey.
Warnings: um, lots. not all of which I'm willing to specify. for starters, these guys are evil and soulless, and will behave as such the whole way through. even after they're soft on Dawn, they do some pretty unconscienable things to her. elements of non-con. and Dawn is 17, so where I live that's legal but *shrugs*. very politically incorrect in places, but if it comforts you, it's more of a demon/human thing than a male/female thing ;)
Disclaimer: not mine, but ain't they pretty?

A/N: how is this fic AU? Angelus never got a soul, so the boys were never separated. Darla and Dru wandered off at some point, possibly in 1894 when the Immortal was such a hot stud ;) Dawn is only 3 years younger than Buffy, so she's 17 in this fic.

previous parts are here



part 4


Dawn awoke feeling cotton-mouthed and groggy. Her head hurt. Her everything hurt. She was disoriented. She’d had a date with Spike last night and…shouldn’t she be at school?

She bolted upright in a king-sized bed that was most definitely not hers. The room was dark and large. Not hers. God—they’d kidnapped her. Spike…was a vampire. How had she missed that? Stupid, stupid, stupid. He looked like some reject from the 80s, she totally should have known. A really hot reject, but not somebody that had updated his look anytime in the last decade, for sure. He didn’t just have bad circulation in his hands—he had no circulation in his hands.

He liked throats. God Dawn, wake up and clear the hormones out of your ears.

She wondered if they knew about Buffy, or if it was a coincidence. At least she had woken up wearing her clothing, so they hadn’t…. But then again, it’s not as though she hadn’t thrown herself at Spike every night that week.

Ok, think. Dawn unplugged the lamp that was next to the bed. It was pretty weighty, not that that would do anything to a vampire, but they didn’t exactly leave stakes lying around and it was better than nothing.

It seemed like she was in a master suite. Big bedroom, big bed up on a platform. Sitting area, fireplace. Lots of books. It was pretty swank actually. No dirty basement nest for these guys. Buffy had never talked about vampires living like this. There was an attached bathroom bigger than her room at home.

Home. Her mom must be worried sick. Buffy would be looking….

Dawn just had to stay alive until then. Because Buffy wouldn’t stop until she found her. Dawn was positive of that.

The door to the bedroom had to be locked, but it didn’t hurt to try. Dawn was surprised when the knob turned freely in her hand. She cracked the door, holding her breath, scared of alerting anyone to her presence. She was about to peek into the hallway when a hand slapped the door shut.

From the inside.

She shrieked and dropped the lamp. A big foot kicked it aside before she could reclaim it.

“I don’t think it’s all that gracious to run off without thanking your host, do you?”

There was no way she was getting out that door now. How had she not noticed him in the room?

Dawn took a step back, and Angelus slid more fully between her and the door. Shit. He didn’t even look pissed, just…dangerous. She backed up some more on instinct, and he took a step forward. She mentally reviewed the room. Nowhere to go. She could lock herself in the bathroom, but he could easily get through the door.

“C’mon now, don’t be that way. I could have killed you in your sleep, but I didn’t. How did you sleep, by the way?”

She goggled at him, open-mouthed. Angelus smiled at her benignly, hands casually in his pockets, but it didn’t make him look less like a killer.

A monster. Because that’s what he was. God, she was stupid. Little Dawnie Summers does it again.

“Like someone who’d been thrown out of a car and then smothered.”

He held his palms up in a gesture of surrender. “Hey, don’t look at me. That was all you, baby. Not exactly my style.”

She remembered his teeth on her throat and shivered.

Dawn looked at the door. “So uh…where’s Spike?” She was pissed that she’d been deceived by him, but…lesser of two evils. She’d feel a whole lot better if he was here right now. Preferably, standing between her and Angelus.

Angelus glanced over his shoulder, smirking. “He’s busy. A little tied up. And he wanted to give me some time to get to know our new roomie.”

“I don’t remember signing a lease.” She ignored the quaver in her own voice.

He laughed. “Don’t worry, we didn’t either. Mortgage is all paid up. Probably. Either way, not going to ruin my credit.”

Dawn didn’t trust the laid-back, mirthful quality of his voice. “What do you want with me?”

He gave her a big smile then, face lit with straight white teeth, and she realized that he was actually pretty handsome. Her stomach rolled nervously. “C’mon, Dawnie. You’re a smart girl. Spike won’t shut up about how clever you are. I’m sure you can figure it out. Young and pretty. …Good genes.”

Dawn studied his faintly amused face intently. He was talking about sex, obviously, but did he mean Buffy? Good genes. They stared at one another for a long moment, frozen at an impasse. She almost asked, but if they didn’t know…. If they didn’t know who her sister was, it was better that they never found out.

“Yeah, well. I’m not interested.”

He smirked. “Ladies don’t lie, Dawn.” His eyes strayed to the ceiling as he sucked his teeth. “Course, ladies also don’t let old dead guys eat them out in public, so I guess we can’t really put you in that category any more.”

When he reached out to touch her face, Dawn jerked away. Irritated, he grabbed for her and she dodged, and he moved to box her into the corner by the bed. In a fit of inspiration, she yanked the cord for the drapes, and they flew open—natural light flooding the room.

Angelus recoiled onto the other side of the wide swath of sunshine. She could see his jaw clenching in the new light.

“Close them.”

“Hell no.”

“Waiting you out will only make me angry, Dawn. You won’t like that.”

She was shaking, but she was safe in her little corner. The door to the bathroom lay in the sunbeam. The door to the outside world lay in his territory.

She was safe for now, but she’d only bought herself time. A handful of hours till sunset. She thought it was still early afternoon.

He relaxed suddenly, and she thought it was strange how that actually made him look more intimidating. As if he knew exactly what he was going to do to her, and he’d have plenty of time to work out the details.

“Fine. Suit yourself. I’ll see you tonight.”

The door clicked and locked behind him, but Dawn stayed huddled in the corner.

Just in case.

maybe that wasn't so bright, Dawn...

Date: 2007-03-26 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
dear gods how i love you! this story is awesome and i can't wait for you to update this and strength in numbers.
kat

Date: 2007-03-27 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hahaha! I'm very glad you enjoy this, and strength! *hugs*

Date: 2007-03-26 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com
"He didn’t just have bad circulation in his hands—he had no circulation in his hands.He liked throats. God Dawn, wake up and clear the hormones out of your ears." Hahaha, excellent Dawn voice!

This was a wonderfully vivid paragraph: "He relaxed suddenly, and she thought it was strange how that actually made him look more intimidating. As if he knew exactly what he was going to do to her, and he’d have plenty of time to work out the details." I can feel the threat and menace Dawn's facing, and leaving her huddled in a corner drove that home nicely.

Date: 2007-03-27 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee, glad you like the Dawn-voice. also glad you enjoyed that line...it's funny how folks always like the lines that you kind of throw in there just before posting on a whim.

leaving her huddled in a corner drove that home nicely.
great to know!

thanks!
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Date: 2007-03-27 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks babe :)

Hormones are so blinding, I think it's very realistic.
haha, I'm glad it didn't just come off as me taking the easy way around the plot *shifty eyes* but yeah, we're all stupid over lust once or twice, right? some of us more than others :)

no, no it's not. but at least she has the slayer ace in hre hole...not that it'll do her much good if she pisses him off before Buffy finds her ;)


And she's such a clever girl, Spike really is the lesser of two evils.

it would appear so. *cough* ;)

Date: 2007-03-26 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missus-grace.livejournal.com
You know, I never really liked Dawn for this exact reason. She only existed so Buffy could pull her out of danger week after week. So I don't mind seeing her in this predicament. 'Sides, it ain't much of a predicament - being holed up with Angelus and Spike.

So Spike is tied up...literally, I wonder? What did he do? :)

Date: 2007-03-27 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
You know, I never really liked Dawn for this exact reason. She only existed so Buffy could pull her out of danger week after week.
yes, it was rather predictable. I'm glad you like where I'm going with this.

So Spike is tied up...literally, I wonder? What did he do? :)
of course literally. and...does there need to be a reason? :D

Date: 2007-03-26 09:05 pm (UTC)
laisserais: kiss (angel/faith - wriggle)
From: [personal profile] laisserais
*wicked, gleeful cackling* whee! hahaha. i loved how awesomely terrified Dawn is of Angelus, and her perception of his demeanor was so perfect.

Lol, i loved how Dawn makes these connections now: He looked like some reject from the 80s, she totally should have known. and He didn’t just have bad circulation in his hands—he had no circulation in his hands. and how now Spike has bad fashion. lol


“He’s busy. A little tied up. And he wanted to give me some time to get to know our new roomie.” hee! i'll bet he's just a little tied up! *g* this was so unbelievably kick ass. but now you're incredibly mean, because i am dying to find out what happens next! ack!

Date: 2007-03-26 09:06 pm (UTC)
laisserais: kiss (Default)
From: [personal profile] laisserais
d'oh! in my greedy consumption of this brilliant chapter, i forgot: congratulations on the nom! it's totally well deserved. :)

Date: 2007-03-27 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
your icon. bwahaha.

Dawn is rather conveniently perceptive, isn't she? lmao. funny how that works. *shifty eyes*

and how now Spike has bad fashion. lol
hahahha. well, the boyfriend always looks stupider and more poorly dressed after the first fight. lmfao.

lol, little does Dawn know that that is literal. I'm glad I've got you all, uh...titillated ;)

thanks for the fb and the congrats *hugs*

Date: 2007-03-26 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danna7000.livejournal.com
Angel can be talking in a normal voice with a smile on his face and you just know he's extremely dangerous. That is what's so breathtaking about him.

Jump out the window, Dawn! Run into the sunshine!

Date: 2007-03-27 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I agree!

except for the part where you're telling her to run away. I don't agree with that at all :D

Date: 2007-03-27 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danna7000.livejournal.com
Well you're absolutely right because how could anything evil happen if Dawn got away? I guess I wasn't thinking.

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Date: 2007-03-27 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-dark-ami.livejournal.com
Spike tied up? I presume literally :P

Poor Dawnie, she must be terrified. I like how she now thought through the things that she had learnt about spike, that should have at the very least suggested vampire.

I really hope that made even a small bit of sense, it’s late and I’m really tired but I wanted to leave a review in case I forgot tomorrow.

I should probably have stuck with something simple like, Great Chap!

Date: 2007-03-27 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
of course literally!

it did make sense :) she was a little slow on the uptake due to hormones, and now she's kicking herself, for sure.

thanks!

Date: 2007-03-27 12:26 am (UTC)
vikingprincess: Big girl panties?  I'm putting on my ass-kicker boots and going commando! (Default)
From: [personal profile] vikingprincess
Whoa. intense.

Date: 2007-03-27 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks babe!

Date: 2007-03-27 12:52 am (UTC)
lynnenne: (spangel becoming by animebooklover)
From: [personal profile] lynnenne
Excellent suspense in this chapter. You've captured Angelus' menace really well.

Date: 2007-03-27 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thank you! that's great to hear.

Date: 2007-03-27 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetwhip.livejournal.com
Man is Dawn ever in trouble! She never seems to make the right move. Nifty chapter!


Gabrielle

Date: 2007-03-27 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
LOL. yeah, that's pretty much Dawn's lot in life. glad you're enjoying it!

Date: 2007-03-27 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jans-intentions.livejournal.com
Poor Dawn! Angelus is so freaky that I'd have done that too.

Date: 2007-03-27 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol, yeah, he just seems suspect for some reason ;)

Date: 2007-03-27 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snogged.livejournal.com
This story is wondrously addicting.

I have to agree that your Dawn voice is well done and conveys the severity of her situation in a way not that being captured by Angelus and Spike would really be so bad. Well, maybe, if there were actually chainsaws involved. That wouldn't be so good, I suppose, now would it?

Date: 2007-03-27 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol yay

I'm glad my Dawn voice works and is effective in striking the right balance. and uh...chainsaws would not be good. ha!

Date: 2007-03-27 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkinnocent.livejournal.com
well written as always, I like how Dawn is her usual contradicton: scared shitless but brave at the same time.

My only thing was... if she was standing near a window-- why didn't she jump out of it/climb down?

Date: 2007-03-27 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks dear! I'm pleased that you like my Dawn.

My only thing was... if she was standing near a window-- why didn't she jump out of it/climb down?
*cough* yeah, I explain that option away later. ;)

Date: 2007-03-27 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkspace99.livejournal.com
Oh shoot! And I was hoping to see Angelus in action too! But at the same time, I'm kinda rooting for Dawn. We all know she'll lose because well it's just no fun if she wins. Still, she's not giving up easily and she's pretty damn resourceful!

And Spike tied up? Please please tell us more about that. Spike being tied up is always very stimulating, especially if Angelus is the one doing the tying. And I bet Angelus will be taking out his frustrations on poor tied up Spike, in more ways than one...

Date: 2007-03-27 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
haha, there's plenty of time to see Angelus in 'action,' one way or another ;)

We all know she'll lose because well it's just no fun if she wins.
damn straight. bwahahaha.

yes'm, I imagine Spike is taking the brunt of Angelus' fury...and that he doesn't mind one bit *cough*

Date: 2007-03-27 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watchersgoddess.livejournal.com
Damn, I like Angelus in your story! Normally he's not my favourite chara but here... He's really hot! And even if she doesn't want to, Dawn sees it too... *eg*
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, hon!

Date: 2007-03-27 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks! I'm glad you like my Angelus, honey. *hugs*

Date: 2007-03-27 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkershadeof.livejournal.com
Congratulations on the nom! I'm so not surprised, this is such a great story! Plus, you know, sexy!

This chapter, I laughed out loud at this: God Dawn, wake up and clear the hormones out of your ears. Funny!

And of course I loved Spike being a little tied up. One of the best ways for him to be! *g*

And I really love Angelus being pure evil. Most of the times, it's like, 'yeah, he's evil, but he is sooo hot'. Now he's just.. evil. I love it!

Date: 2007-03-27 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks muchly!

I'm glad I could make you giggle. and yup, Spike tied up is a thing of beauty. as is Angelus being evil :D

Date: 2007-03-28 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-luv-trees.livejournal.com
Dawn is just dragging out the unavoidable for herself, hope Angelus isn't too upset with her... hah, who am I kidding, it's gonna be bad isn't it? And Spike's tied up? Gah! I'm not going to have any fingernails left if you keep teasing us like this! More please...

Loving the beautiful suspense of your words, C

Date: 2007-03-28 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yeah, I can only think she's made things worse for herself. ah, Dawn. give in. give in to the vampires. *rubs hands together*

hee. *pours pepper on your nails to keep you from gnawing them away*
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Re: Ug...

Date: 2007-03-28 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks for commenting, and welcome to lj! thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Re: Ug...

Date: 2007-03-29 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] david-james-gal.livejournal.com
hiya! im new to! :)

Date: 2007-03-28 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] david-james-gal.livejournal.com
heya hun! great update! keep em coming! oxoxx 'Angelus glanced over his shoulder, smirking. “He’s busy. A little tied up'. thats great!!!:P :)

Date: 2007-03-28 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thank you! I'm glad you like this one :)

Date: 2007-03-29 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] david-james-gal.livejournal.com
all the chapters are great! ( don't no if you remember me i sent you an email about a week or so ago about how i cant wait for you to update and about being friends lol) take care hun bye byexx! keep up the great work!! :):P

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Date: 2007-03-29 10:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prophcygrl.livejournal.com
Just popping in to let you know that I've just read the first four chapters and I'm loving it. I'm especially enjoying your Angelus. I look forward to the next installment. :)

Date: 2007-03-29 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yay, glad to know you've enjoyed it! Angelus is such a great character :)
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Date: 2007-04-10 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
haha, yes, more on the window in the next chapter.

she really is :)

Date: 2007-04-22 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
You know, it's funny, I was not going to read this story, as you can see from the fact that I held off until chapter 4 to comment. I don't know why I pretend. I'm a sucker for the whole demon kink, I love Angelus and Spike when they are bad.
I think I was avoiding this story because it makes me feel guilty about not reading and writing more Spuffy. See my problem with Spuffy has become that Buffy is so young. I feel like I want more mature heroines. Not because of an age squick, just because I'm bored with the young love thing.
But this is so my kink, and everytime I see the lovely picture for it, I just want to click. Which is all a very long way of saying, I'm really enjoying it so far :)

Date: 2007-04-22 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I get that. obviously you've probably figured out by now that I have an older/younger kink. hahaha. thought that normally only comes into play in my spander, really, and sometimes spangel human au.

I often write Dawn as a teenager, but that's for obvious reasons...she was a teenager in canon. I don't think she's very childish at all in this fic, beyond this being her first experience with sex and love, so hopefully it won't be a problem for you. I mainly needed her to be underage (and therefore legally bound to her family) for aspects of this fic to work.

I'm glad you enjoy the evil!kink (gah, I love it too!) and are enjoying the fic so far. that fic pic is great, isn't it? [livejournal.com profile] vamptastica is very talented.
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Date: 2007-06-26 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thank you! glad you liked the punishment tension. she doesn't quite understand what she's gotten herself into *g*

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