ext_7363 ([identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thatotherperv 2008-08-19 07:18 pm (UTC)

This is fantastic. They're both in deep, but defining what they're in would send Jensen running. I admire the language and pacing here, the rhythm captures the emotional roller coaster beautifully.

Jensen is so deeply conflicted, it makes me hurt for him. He looks at Jeff and sees a relationship, but he both wants and hates the intimacy that implies. You leave me wondering what Jeff is seeing.

Off to the next chapter of this emotional story.

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