A very nice fic. I look forward to the next piece. This isn't the best Spawn-fic I've ever read but it's well above average and when you get Angel into the story I'm sure it will be terrific. I also look forward to see how you manage the remaning Scoobies and apocalypse into the life of Dawn and Spike.

When you got to the penetration-sex, and I’m not saying ‘finally’ beacuse I think it came in the right time, you described just enough. It seemed so right when she jumped him in the car. ;)
I'd waited for 'the sex' from the beginning but you didn’t rush it or wait to long. It was just right, without being to perfect.

I love that you will have Angel/Spike/Dawn. I've never read that pairing, not even a sexual Angel/Dawn, but I've been looking for one.

Nice work. Keep it up.