I haven't finished reading part 1 yet, and I have to comment.
Your writing is superb, and I wish you'd consider converting this into an original fic and submitting it to a romance house. All you'd have to do is up the heroine's age, make Spike a single father, ditch Dru (I'm sorry), and run with it. You've already got every ingredient for a really strong bestseller. Characterization, a strong plot, beautiful dialogue, fantastic setup.
If you're not a professional writer already, you should be. I'd buy anything you produced.
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Date: 2006-06-03 04:55 pm (UTC)Your writing is superb, and I wish you'd consider converting this into an original fic and submitting it to a romance house. All you'd have to do is up the heroine's age, make Spike a single father, ditch Dru (I'm sorry), and run with it. You've already got every ingredient for a really strong bestseller. Characterization, a strong plot, beautiful dialogue, fantastic setup.
If you're not a professional writer already, you should be. I'd buy anything you produced.
Going back to reading.