How did I miss this? Oh, that's right, I was coughing up my lungs. :)
Great chapter. This bit:
But when the day came, it all fell away and he was left with the calm clarity—that buzz of peace—that always came from giving in. He picked through the drawer, each key whispering logistics, and finally allowed himself to choose exactly which prick would be brought low today. He knew the bloke well…he was a bad man, all rotten inside. Spoiled and puffed up as a pampered peacock like him would be. Never a hard day in his life, no doubt.
... did a great job of pulling the chapter to a focal point at the end, and give some insight into Spike's motivation to burn. Plus, I enjoyed the Holland Manners's ref and the dark wig.
How did I miss this?
Date: 2007-05-15 11:12 pm (UTC)Great chapter. This bit:
But when the day came, it all fell away and he was left with the calm clarity—that buzz of peace—that always came from giving in. He picked through the drawer, each key whispering logistics, and finally allowed himself to choose exactly which prick would be brought low today. He knew the bloke well…he was a bad man, all rotten inside. Spoiled and puffed up as a pampered peacock like him would be. Never a hard day in his life, no doubt.
... did a great job of pulling the chapter to a focal point at the end, and give some insight into Spike's motivation to burn. Plus, I enjoyed the Holland Manners's ref and the dark wig.
Definitely looking forward to reading more. :)