Date: 2007-06-02 03:07 am (UTC)
But then Angel imagined sinking balls-deep into that slim, mewling body and a blowjob seemed like a consolation prize. The gas pedal hit the floor.

That sentence pulled me right into the *urgency* of them, and the tension after that didn't end until:

Projectile, lots of it—and when some arced far enough to land on his own lips, and Will went lax and sated despite the continued jarring of his body into Angel’s…and then his tongue slid out to lick the drop away…. (didn't realize how into it I was until I licked my *own* lips :D )

Then you took it in another direction, and hit my h/c button *hard*. This was really a damn good chapter, girl. Day-mn fine.

Thanks for the beautiful words, C
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