Superb writing, I speed read it to the end and then realised that was *all wrong* so re-read it again, slowly, so I could savour and, ok, wallow a bit. :-) Good ghod was that a good read!
Loved this bit: But then Angel imagined sinking balls-deep into that slim, mewling body and a blowjob seemed like a consolation prize. The gas pedal hit the floor.
It was Angel's certainty that he could get Spike 'mewling' that did it for me! Well, that and the petting and the kissing and the ordering about and Spike's neediness and Angel's *need* and ... oh my ghod the sweet and gentle caring afterwards. Beautiful! *pets both the boys lovingly*
Oh and, by the way, *this* is what you produce when you have writer's block? *stunned* You rock! :-)
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Date: 2007-06-02 12:53 pm (UTC)Superb writing, I speed read it to the end and then realised that was *all wrong* so re-read it again, slowly, so I could savour and, ok, wallow a bit. :-) Good ghod was that a good read!
Loved this bit:
But then Angel imagined sinking balls-deep into that slim, mewling body and a blowjob seemed like a consolation prize. The gas pedal hit the floor.
It was Angel's certainty that he could get Spike 'mewling' that did it for me! Well, that and the petting and the kissing and the ordering about and Spike's neediness and Angel's *need* and ... oh my ghod the sweet and gentle caring afterwards. Beautiful! *pets both the boys lovingly*
Oh and, by the way, *this* is what you produce when you have writer's block? *stunned* You rock! :-)