thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it that much. this fic is a joy to write. I love hearing all the particulars that worked for you. I always thought Dawn was exaggeratedly bratty on the show, until maybe season 7. it *is* weird, considering how young and yet relatively mature all the scoobies were when the show started. I always thought that Dawn would make a beautiful, confident woman, and here that just happened too soon.
Dawn is a fully-formed person, as opposed to a plot device. your Dawn is better than canon's. I actually like your Dawn! heehee, I got a kick out of that.
and I'm glad you like Spike here too. He's such a contradiction.
thank you so much for all your kind words. I'd love to hear your thoughts on the rest :) I actually plotted this fic out last night through chapter 20, and things are gonna get interesting ;)
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Date: 2006-10-29 09:06 pm (UTC)Dawn is a fully-formed person, as opposed to a plot device.
your Dawn is better than canon's.I actually like your Dawn!heehee, I got a kick out of that.
and I'm glad you like Spike here too. He's such a contradiction.
thank you so much for all your kind words. I'd love to hear your thoughts on the rest :) I actually plotted this fic out last night through chapter 20, and things are gonna get interesting ;)