And the scales finally fall from her eyes here: "Dawn realized sickly that they must have fed from her just before they…. Just before. Her stomach rolled, and she swallowed back the wave of acidic panic."
This was a vividly detailed, action packed chapter. The weight of Janice and the weight of realizing her lovers are murderers amped up Dawn's palpable tension until it finally exploded with Spike's naked entrance. I love the detail of her apologizing to Spike even as she's trying to make her escape from the murderous fiend.
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Date: 2007-10-04 04:11 pm (UTC)This was a vividly detailed, action packed chapter. The weight of Janice and the weight of realizing her lovers are murderers amped up Dawn's palpable tension until it finally exploded with Spike's naked entrance. I love the detail of her apologizing to Spike even as she's trying to make her escape from the murderous fiend.