This is completely fascinating, and while it contains two things I usually stay away from (2nd person and dub-con), you are handling everything so beautifully, and though it's harsh i can feel your tenderness towards the characters, and their hidden tenderness towards one another. Lovely job, really, thank you.
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Date: 2010-05-22 06:36 am (UTC)