You did a really, really good job with the dialogue of someone who is supportive of Liam's sexual preferences and doing so in a heterosexual male voice. Absolutely dead on dialogue, especially from an Italian.
You really outdid yourself in this chapter. Pat yourself on the back!
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Date: 2006-08-04 09:40 am (UTC)You really outdid yourself in this chapter. Pat yourself on the back!