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in which I update again quickly, but am still evil and meen, zomg.


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Title: Hostage
Author: Mel ([livejournal.com profile] thatotherperv)
Pairing: Angelus/Dawn/evil!Spike
Rating: NC-17
Summary: When Angelus and Spike come to Sunnydale to kill the slayer, they find more interesting prey.
Warnings: um, lots. not all of which I'm willing to specify. for starters, these guys are evil and soulless, and will behave as such the whole way through. even after they're soft on Dawn, they do some pretty unconscionable things to her. elements of non-con. Daddykink. and Dawn is 17, so where I live that's legal but *shrugs*. very politically incorrect in places, but if it comforts you, it's more of a demon/human thing than a male/female thing ;)
Disclaimer: not mine, but ain't they pretty?

A/N: how is this fic AU? Angelus never got a soul, so the boys were never separated. Darla and Dru wandered off at some point, possibly in 1894 when the Immortal was such a hot stud ;) Dawn is only 3 years younger than Buffy, so she's 17 in this fic.

previous parts are here

Previously:
His eyes rounded in disbelief. “This is all…my fault!? Do you have any idea how grateful you should be?”

Dawn saw red. Grateful. GRATEFUL? Was he joking??

The moment she opened her mouth to tell him off was the moment that Buffy burst into the room.



Part 23

Dawn’s sister had to have the worst timing ever.

Dawn wasn’t entirely clear on why they hadn’t tried to use the locator spell on her six months ago, but whatever. Now here she was with her floaty ball of locating light and her crossbow and two men who sized up Dawn’s state of half-dress pretty quickly and averted their eyes, blushing three shades of red. Giles and Xander glared at Angelus instead of risking a glance at her near-nudity.

And ok, maybe Buffy’s timing didn’t completely suck after all, because just now, Dawn really wanted to go home. Wanted to go home so badly it hurt.

But she still didn’t like that Buffy had a weapon pointed at her boyfriend’s very stupid vampire’s heart.

“Dawn,” Buffy said finally, voice all…tense and badass and me Slayer you vampire, let go or you’re dust. Her eyes were on Angelus. “Get over here.”

“No.” Angelus’ arm tightened around her waist, and Dawn sighed, because this wasn’t going to be pretty.

I’m sorry, I don’t think I asked you. Dawn, get out of his lap.”

She was tired and cranky and irritable with everyone, especially when she shoved at Angelus and he didn’t budge. But it was Buffy that she snapped at. “Okay, sorry I didn’t think of that before, with this vampire holding onto me like I’m the last pint of virgin blood. Let me stop dicking around and get up now.”

“It won’t be a problem how hard he’s holding on to you when I dust him,” Buffy said pointedly.

Angelus growled and tugged Dawn closer.

Dawn didn’t even try to struggle. “Let go of me—Buffy, don’t stake him—Stop being a stubborn ass, and let go of me.”

“You’re staying here.”

“You know, it really looks like I’m not. It really looks like I’m either leaving here with you in one piece, or leaving here shaking dust off my clothes. You got caught with your pants down, them’s the breaks.”

Giles coughed uncomfortably at the mention of pants being down, metaphorically. Since she wasn’t wearing any. Or underwear, for that matter.

Angelus looked pissed, but she was right, so he loosened his hold on her. “I’m just going to come for you. This is pointless.”

“Big piles of dust aren’t much with the vendetta,” Buffy retorted.

“God, would everybody just…stop! You—” she poked Angelus “are not moving until we’re gone. And you—” she narrowed her eyes at Buffy “are not staking anyone.”

“Why the hell not?”

“Because you want me, and you’ve got me. I just want to go home. Please?” The lost, pleading quality of her voice was only half-faked.

Buffy’s aggressive stance loosened, lips pressing together. “Fine. Put some pants on.”

Dawn blushed and nodded, slipping off the bed. Angelus didn’t try to stop her. Before she turned to the dresser, she reminded the two of them—“No moving. No staking.”—and before you could say ‘awkward,’ she was all decent again.

Dawn didn’t have to look back as she left the room to know that Angelus was furious. So she didn’t bother.

And when they were safely out in the sunshine and Buffy pulled her into her arms and slowly fell apart, bawling—Buffy, the strongest living person she knew, crying and clinging to her that way—Dawn managed to squeeze out a few tears of her own.

Even though she wasn’t really sure what she was crying for.

~*~*~*~*~*~
home life, ain't all its cracked up to be

avoid buffy-bashing in comments? kthanxbye. *squish*

Date: 2007-10-09 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snogged.livejournal.com
Bad Buffy.

How dare she take Dawnie away from the hot vampire lovin'?

Regardless, kudoes to Dawn for standing up to Buffy and leaving in one piece.

Date: 2007-10-09 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee. bad buffy *bops her with a newspaper*

thanks babe!

Date: 2007-10-09 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-dark-ami.livejournal.com
I don't know whether to be pleased or sad that she got away...never mind messing with Dawn's head, I think you've messed with mine.

Love that Dawn wasn't embarrassed by her nudity, she certainly would have been before she was got a hold of by Spike & Angel.

Date: 2007-10-09 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
...never mind messing with Dawn's head, I think you've messed with mine.
*SNICKER* that was not my intention at all. at.all. *shakes head*

thanks babe

Date: 2007-10-09 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] digopheliadug.livejournal.com
What happens to naked!Dawn naked!Spike naked!Angel when Dawn goes home? fix it! fix it!

damned interesting plot interfering with my porn. ^^

Date: 2007-10-09 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] digopheliadug.livejournal.com
Oh, fyi, that's not an actual criticism... I re-read it and I wasn't sure how it came across. The story rocks.

Also, awww, crying Buffy!

Date: 2007-10-09 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I took it as a compliment, no worries :)

yeah, she loves her sis. *smooch* thanks babe!

Hostage 23

Date: 2007-10-09 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com
I'm really liking this story is a dirtywrongbad way! :-)

Obviously what Angel and Spike have done to Dawn is *wrong wrong wrong* but we've had some damn fine vampire lovin' scenes. Feel free to provide more of those if you like! :-)

I'm actually impressed with Buffy in this chapter. I would have thought she was a shoot first talk later girl in this situation. Angel is lucky not to have been dusted. I wonder where Spike is in all of this.

I also wonder how come the Scoobies didn't do the locator spell on Dawn before. My guess is they did but Angel had some magics up to foil the spell. Maybe he just got complacent since it's been six months and the magics aren't being used any more?

And, my two cents, Angel killed Janice and made it *look* like an accident. The only reason he didn't tell Spike what he did was to make sure that Spike believed the fiction and it came across that way to Dawn.

I'm dying to find out how Dawn and the bois get back together again. Methinks that Dawn is gonna gonna go back due to Stockholm Syndromefree will. :-)

Re: Hostage 23

Date: 2007-10-09 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
ah, I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

yeah, he *is* lucky indeed :) as for the rest, we'll seeeeeee! thanks for reading
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Date: 2007-10-09 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
well, I do what *I* think is right. no guarantees you'll agree :)

thanks!

Date: 2007-10-09 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ldyavalon.livejournal.com
Naughty Buffy, you just want some vampire lovin' for yourself :P Does that count as Buffy bashing?

I think that Dawn is going to be a very strong gal about thi, but of course, she's still mad at Angelus for killing Janice. And I don't think she's stupid either.

Date: 2007-10-09 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
haha, no, it just counts as the truth :P everybody wants some vampire lovin, man.

thanks!

Date: 2007-10-09 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ldyavalon.livejournal.com
I know I do :P

Oh Noooo!!!

Date: 2007-10-09 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelusslave.livejournal.com
Dammit!! I knew buffster was going to spoil the boys' fun!! :( Big porn party pooper Buffy! *pouting here*
So I just know you're going to do something drastic here, but I was glad to NOT see Angelus kill Buffy. Dawn would NEVER forgive him for that and we want her to play nice with the big, hot, hunky evil vampire!! *evil little grin and wink*

As always Mel... Still lovin this fic!

Re: Oh Noooo!!!

Date: 2007-10-09 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
well, you know, rescuing her sister and all. spoil sport ;)

no, she really wouldn't be able to forgive them.

thanks!

Date: 2007-10-09 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com
Dawn being all forceful and keeping it together and extricating herself from the arms of her "boyfriend" was pitch perfect. Somehow Dawn kept her dignity even in her underwear free state. I love that Buffy stayed in slayer mode until they hit the sunshine.

I can't see Dawn taking to life as a kid in the back seat again. She's been opened to a surreal, sexual world. That genie's not going back in the bottle.

Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Emotions are running high, but you always keep the group in character.

Date: 2007-10-10 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks sweetie, I'm glad you liked this chapter. and thanks for the compliment to my characterization.

I can't see Dawn taking to life as a kid in the back seat again. She's been opened to a surreal, sexual world. That genie's not going back in the bottle.
true!

Date: 2007-10-09 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adorkablefae.livejournal.com
*sob* Nooo... I want more hawt vampyr secks. Now.

Please?

Date: 2007-10-10 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*snicker*

*petpetpet* it'll be okay!

Date: 2007-10-09 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelstoy.livejournal.com
Have I mentioned how evil you are in the places you leave this story?

God Damn am I enjoying this story!!! (and I normally hate Dawn) Totally can't wait for more!!!

Date: 2007-10-10 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
mmmhhhhmmmmm *grins*

thanks babe!

Date: 2007-10-10 12:23 am (UTC)
laisserais: kiss (buffy - hero)
From: [personal profile] laisserais
meep! haha, loved dawn's internal voice here. and i can't believe both buffy and angelus listened to her! and where the hell were they six months ago with the ball of light! :P

*rubs hands together in glee* now what's gonna happen, mel?

Date: 2007-10-10 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee, we'll seeeeeeeeeee! *isn't tellin nothin*

thanks babe!
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Date: 2007-10-10 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yeeaaaaaahhhh, but something tells me she'll be back ;)

we'll seee! haha. and yeah, I have this part written already. still working on the epilogue, but mostly the thing's in the bag. whew.

Date: 2007-10-10 02:51 am (UTC)
vikingprincess: Big girl panties?  I'm putting on my ass-kicker boots and going commando! (Default)
From: [personal profile] vikingprincess
oh dear. *frets a bunch*

Date: 2007-10-10 10:04 pm (UTC)
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Date: 2007-10-10 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol. thanks sweetie, I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Date: 2007-10-10 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
*doesn't like you*

*witholds humping*

*stabs Buffy and her crappy timing*

Date: 2007-10-10 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hahahaha
well, I guess stabbing her isn't....bashing her.....

*snigger cuz I know what you think of her*

it's ok, we're fasting this week, so I'm not in the mood for your humping anyway *turns up nose*

Date: 2007-10-11 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
it's ok, we're fasting this week, so I'm not in the mood for your humping anyway *turns up nose*

Fasting?

Date: 2007-10-11 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yeah, fasting. detoxy kind of stuff. Iike...5 days. ish.

Date: 2007-10-11 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
yeah, fasting. detoxy kind of stuff. Iike...5 days. ish.

O.O

O.o

Date: 2007-10-11 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lmao. dude, I've had a weird fucking day. I heart your googly eyes

Date: 2007-10-11 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
lmao. dude, I've had a weird fucking day. I heart your googly eyes

You *are* fucking weird, lmao.

*humps you*

Date: 2007-10-11 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
heeee! I'm weird so I get humped! *is weird always*

Date: 2007-10-13 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eyezrthewindows.livejournal.com
heeee! I'm weird so I get humped! *is weird always*

*humphumphump*

Date: 2007-10-10 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cafedemonde.livejournal.com
Uh, how funny is it that we ALL think its very bad that sweet, innocent Dawnie is free of the vamps.

Got all caught up again and loved every word!

Um... where's Spike?

Date: 2007-10-10 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
Uh, how funny is it that we ALL think its very bad that sweet, innocent Dawnie is free of the vamps.

*snicker* well that means I just did my job! so I'm happy :)

we'll seeee!

Date: 2007-10-11 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkinnocent.livejournal.com
okay, so... this is the point where I'm going to just write letters to convey buffy bashing without actually saying it.

OIAHSE:OGIBGIURHPW(&#$%($HOINRETIN!!!!!eleven!

Okay, now that I got that out of my system. Hm... So yeah, Angelus= definintely killed Janice and made it look like an accident. Spike= definitely off somewhere doing something naughty naughty naughty- not nice.

I did like the way Buffy cried though, reminded me of the scene in the episode after The Body.

If you kill off the Scoobs, don't hurt Tara! *hugs Tara* I love her too much.

Oh mighty Queen of Cliffhangers, please, I beg of you, grant us another chapter!

Date: 2007-10-11 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee, thank you for your self-censorship :)

ah, yes! much like that, haha. in this 'verse, joyce never died, so it's a nice little substitute :)

no dead Tara! promise!

new chapter up now :) *adjusts her crown*

Date: 2007-10-11 10:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shapinglight
I missed this chapter when you posted it - and no Buffy bashing from me. I like her, and here she behaves exactly as I'd expect.

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