Strength in Numbers, part 14
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uh...my first ever fight sequence in this part. that's why I took so long with this, I've been fretting over it for a month, but now it's like...whatever, I'm just gonna post it.
I couldn't help putting in a little wink to Angel/Cordy, because I shipped them hard before I even knew what shipping was, and I love them as friends as well.
Title: Strength in Numbers
Author: Mel (
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Pairings: Spike/Dawn, Angel/Spike, and Angel/Dawn. eventually S/A/D. References to A/B and S/B.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The nerds were successful in assassinating Buffy in late season 6, and this fic spins events out afterwards. See A/N in part 1 for where it goes AU.
Warnings: sex with a minor (16yo at the youngest point), slash, eventual threesome, character death (Buffy)…errr…. bloodplay. other stuff.
Disclaimer: Joss would blush. I am, alas, still poor. don’t sue me.
Feedback: please!
Previous parts are here
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Part 14
The Turok-Han wasn’t the most formidable thing Spike ever fought—it’s technique was shite, for one thing. Like a horror-movie zombie, stiff arms flailing as he growled menacingly, hits clumsy and without finesse.
Its lack of poetry just made the fact that Spike was getting his arse kicked all the more shameful.
Where the thing lost points for execution, it made up in construction. Sturdy bastard. A stake to the chest did nothing—he’d found that out the hard way—and the holy water had burned him a hell of a lot worse than this thing.
Nothing killed the blighter. Well, there was always something.
He and Angelus had always assumed the thing a myth before now, and Wes’ research had yielded no solution. It seemed afraid of sunlight, but that was no use to him. However, Angel agreed that it could probably be dusted by decapitation.
Spike aimed the crossbow and pulled the trigger, knowing it was an empty threat, but desperately needing a moment to scrape himself off the pavement. He grabbed the nearest weapon—a metal bar that reminded him of better days…pool cues, subway rails. One hit to the face and another to the chest to derail the beast and Spike was using the bar to catapult himself towards some kind of axe lying around the construction site.
Gramps was on him too quick—ducking the blow meant to take off his head and shoving Spike into the side of the office trailer. Spike found the tool wrenched out of his grip, barely escaping a lethal blow himself as he stumbled away. The Turok-Han tossed the weapon and came at him, knocking him around while he was still off-balance until he fell back.
Hard as it was to believe, cinder blocks were hard and not pleasant on the back of the skull. The old codger, on the other hand, seemed to think they tickled when Spike smacked one over its head. It snarled and tossed him onto the construction scaffolding, scrambling up after.
Before Spike could regain his sense, the beast was on him, clamping its gnarled hand around his throat and hoisting him over its head.
He struggled, feet kicking helplessly like a child. For one stark moment he panicked, hearing the girls calling out in distress. It was too strong. Staging this fight to teach the girls a lesson had been the stupidest bloody idea. Cocky. Foolhardy.
That’s what Angelus would say, anyway.
When he was a fledge, Angelus used to hold him aloft just so. William had panicked then as well, still instinctively attached to his breath. His sire had done it again and again, to drive home one thing.
“You stupid sod,” Spike choked out. “Vampire, here—I don’t have to breath.”
He ripped the arrow from the creature’s chest and jammed it into his eye, gaining his footing as the Turok-Han dropped him in pain. Immediately he went on the offense, driving it backwards with blows. If he let the thing recover, he didn’t know if he could gain the upper hand again.
When the beast fell into a pile of wood, Spike leapt after, trading punches. He slammed it face-first into the scaffolding, and it buckled to its knees, dazed.
He wrapped a handy length of wire around its throat from behind and yanked with all his might, slicing until the body against his own crumbled helplessly to dust.
Spike shook the debris off his coat, panting with exertion. Bloody hell. The good news was, it had been the only thing standing between them and Willow.
Remembering his purpose, Spike turned towards the gaggle of little girls watching him slack-jawed. “Well, there. See? They can be killed. So quit your whinging.”
Should have known better than to expect them to be impressed.
“Right!” One of them called out. The black one. Mouthy chit. “Someone with vampire reflexes can kill one of them, and even you almost lost! How the hell are we supposed to kill it?”
Christ he was in pain. Made him all cranky.
“Do you want to die?” he said bluntly. They all fell silent from their murmuring. “Ok then. Don’t expect me to molly-coddle you, because I won’t. But I’ll teach you how to keep yourselves alive, if you shut your traps for three bleedin’ seconds.”
They all blinked at him. He turned and started towards Revello, leaving Xander to herd them after.
“Harris, you’d better get them inside before they get eaten by something. Oh, and after they’re all tucked into their beds, you and I have a date with Red. Bout time we rescued that girl.”
~*~*~*~*~
“Dawn?” Angel’s voice was pinched as the girl in question unconsciously hitched his arm higher between his shoulders.
She was panting, a little out of breath from their lesson. The warm, moist air from her lungs was ghosting softly over his skin with every exhale. “What?”
He could feel her body heat against his back.
“Uh, that was good, so let’s…call it a day, alright? You’re doing well, I think we can stop early.”
Dawn let go of his arm and stepped back, and Angel stifled a groan as he twisted it back into place. When he turned around she was grinning at him. “Yeah, I’m pretty good, right? I can kick your ass.”
Angel snorted, ignoring the shooting pain in his shoulder. “I don’t know about that. I let you win, you know.”
She rolled her eyes as she put away the equipment. “Yeah, whatever.”
Angel waited until she’d left the room to collapse onto the mat, groaning and massaging his shoulder. Jesus. She’d nearly dislocated it, the way she pinned it behind his back.
But what had really made him cry off was the press of her body against his. Much more of that and he would have been limping for an entirely different reason than sore muscles.
“What happened to her being a helpless little girl?”
Angel didn’t even have to lift his head. Cordy. “Yeah, well…you women are never as helpless as you make out to be.”
“And don’t you forget it.” She sat down beside him on the mat, moving his hand out of the way and taking over a deep-tissue massage of his delt. He groaned at the pleasure-pain of a good massage…which incidentally, was not going to make his problem below the waist disappear. “You still going easy on her?”
“She’s not going easy on me,” he griped.
“Big baby.” Angel knew without looking at her that she was smiling. He’d know that tone anywhere.
“Yeah, well, you say that to me next time, when you find my arm dangling from its socket.”
“So maybe you should go a little less easy on her.”
Angel grunted. Maybe.
“She’s stronger than a human,” Cordy observed.
“I know, she’s fast. About as fast as a slayer. A little clumsy, but she’s getting better.”
“So. Do you think she’s—?”
“No,” he said quickly. Though he and Spike had discussed the possibility. Even if she was a potential, she was staying right here. “Honestly, I thought about it, but she doesn’t feel like a slayer to me. And she heals like a human.”
Cordy considered that a moment before fixing him with a glowing smile, patting him on the chest as she finished with his shoulder. “Maybe you’re just getting soft in your old age.”
“I’m not old,” he mumbled. “But I think…you know, when they made Dawn…when they made Dawn, they made her from Buffy.” His heart ached dully as he said her name. It always would, so he’d better get used to it. Nobody was doing Dawn any favors by avoiding the topic.
But some nights he lay awake and wondered just how fast Buffy would have chopped his balls off if she had known the thoughts he was having about her little sister.
Cordy’s eyes were knowing. He was sure she hadn’t missed the waver in his voice, but she let him off the hook when he cleared his throat.
“So you think she’s like…part slayer. Or, essence of slayer.”
“Something like that.”
Cordy pretended to think about that. “Is that why you’re falling in love with her?”
“What? I’m not—!”
“Oh please. Don’t even try it with me, mister. Does Spike know?”
“There’s nothing for him to know. I’m not—”
“Angel.”
He huffed out a sigh, frustrated. There was no use arguing with Cordy, when she thought she knew something. “There’s nothing for him to know…but if there was…I’m pretty sure he wouldn’t stake me.”
“Mmmm. Must be leftover endorphins from all the boning you two did before he left.” Angel stared at her, dumbfounded. “Please, do you think anyone gets it on in this hotel without everyone knowing? It’s not just vamp hearing, Angel. The pipes carry sounds disturbingly well. Why do you think I’m always going to Groo’s place?”
“Because I don’t like him?”
She rolled her eyes. “You two need to put that to rest. And stop changing the subject. I dare you to tell me I’m wrong. I know you’re Denial-Guy, but you’re falling for her. I recognize the irritability.”
Angel didn’t even respond to her teasing, caught up in his own thoughts. He looked away. Was he falling for her? Maybe he was, but— “I shouldn’t.”
Cordy caught his attention by slipping her hand into his. “Like you’re always so responsible with where you put your heart. It doesn’t always make sense, Angel.” She smiled at him smally and added lightly, “Otherwise you would have fallen in love with me.”
He squeezed her hand.
“As it is, you’re stuck with the ones that make no sense whatsoever. And they tend to be small and blond in your case, so at least this one’s a change of pace!” He laughed despite the fact that the idea terrified him. Cordy was good at that. “I like her, Angel. She’s smart and sweet on you and she shows no mercy. And she’s stronger than she looks.”
“…Yeah.”
She rolled to her feet. “Now scrape your lame old ass of the floor, mister, because I had a vision. There’s a guy in Reseda who’s going to hatch flesh-eating demon babies out of his skull at midnight if we don’t stop him from getting poked by mama.”
part 15 here
A/N: This chapter twists the events of Bs7 Showtime. I ganked the fight choreography straight out of that ep. It was sort of training wheels for my first attempt at action.
ALSO! so I have this problem. as I write ahead, I keep wanting Angel to use some endearment for Dawn during some more tender moments but...dude wasn't exactly an endearment kind of guy in canon. that we saw, anyway. but he *can* be so schmoopy when he loves someone (see: Buffy), especially a small young female someone, so I feel like.... anyway, any thoughts on that would be helpful. any of the traditional ones don't sound right coming out of his mouth in a serious context. I've tried "baby" because big guys can get away with that, I've always thought...but it only works for me sometimes and never with Dawn. and I can't see him saying sweetheart or...I don't even know.
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Date: 2007-01-26 05:23 pm (UTC)you know, I think Gaelic is a good idea. I toyed with it but wasn't sure because it seems so...fanon at this point, but I really can't see him using any other endearments but that. and I agree that it seems natural when I see it in fic.
lol, glad you liked 'gramps'. and Rona was annoying, haha. Spike will be picking on her a lot in the future *snickers*
thanks!
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Date: 2007-01-26 04:54 pm (UTC)You're right.
Tough one...
What *would* he say??
maybe... sweetie? or... I dunno...
I'd feel like it had to keep in mind that he still sees her like a young girl?
Dunno.
ooooh,Cordy caught his attention by slipping her hand into his
lmao, I thought she was gonna grope him through his pants to prove him that he was in denial!
too bad though^^
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Date: 2007-01-26 05:24 pm (UTC)totally agree with you on that. I was thinking about that...taking the gaelic suggestion and playing it based on that dynamic.
lmao, that would have been entertaining. :)
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Date: 2007-02-03 04:52 am (UTC)I came up with a Gaelic word for you. Muirnin means beloved, darling and sweetheart in Irish.
Does anyone else but me get chills whenever they hear Angel switch to his Irish brogue. That alone is enough to make any girl drool. Just imagine what it would do to Dawn.
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Date: 2007-01-26 05:12 pm (UTC)woo that was a pretty intense fight scene lol
loved loveddd the cordy stuff *sigh*
and i agree on the gaelic thing for angel, english endearments eee yeah no, not angel
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Date: 2007-01-26 05:26 pm (UTC)I really like the scene with Cordy. glad you enjoyed it :)
yeah it's looking more and more like gaelic is the winner *goes to google 'gaelic endearments'*
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Date: 2007-01-26 06:38 pm (UTC)also, in a non-passionate, tender situation, i think he'd call her 'little one'.
as i was reading the turok-han fight scene, i was struck by how impressively you choreographed the action in words. well done! action is so hard to convey, and it flows really well.
I like Cord here. you're showing her in her "transition" period, where in canon, she's moving away from being shallow and into being a champion. i think you really caught both aspects of her personality. she's maturing, but she's still Cordy.
I also really dug the descriptions of Angel's physical pain. It's so rare that we're inside his head and he's admitting to feeling pain. ususally he's the one inflicting it. Yet in canon, it's obvious that he has a certain vulnerability.
And i liked the observations on Dawn's skills. She does develop a remarkable amount of strength in canon, especially during this era, and it was neat to see some theories advanced as to why. I think it's totally plausible that she's stronger because she's an extension of Buffy.
great chapter! I'm so glad you're updating this fic. :)
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Date: 2007-01-26 08:28 pm (UTC)ah, I can see little one! and good points with the rest re: endearments. got some food for thought :)
I'm glad you liked the fight scene. I feel like it's boring, but it's entirely possible that's because I actually find *reading* action sequences boring. lol. I usually skim them, but it appears I can't really get around writing them here without being lame.
I love Cordy. love love love. I kind of love her as a bitch earlier in canon, but especially As1-3 Cordy...*sighs happily* I could have KILLED joss for making her evil when they brought her back in 4. very bitter about that.
what's funny about Angel bitching about being hurt here, is that I was watching the Angel/Cordy training sequence recently, weeks after writing this...and I hadn't seen it in years, but i don't know whether it was in my subconscious or if I just did a good job with Angel characterization, but there are so many parallels! him hiding the fact that she hurt him, being surprised by her prowess in picking things up...getting his butt kicked and claiming it was on purpose. so funny to realize that in retrospect.
glad you liked my "essence of Buffy" theory. I dealt with it in a different way in that other a/s/d I'm writing. (if you just said 'what other a/s/d'....*runs away*)
lol, this really only ever gets updated once a month. poor thing.
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Date: 2007-01-26 08:39 pm (UTC)"I dealt with it in a different way in that other a/s/d I'm writing." *eyebrows scrunch in puzzlement*
"(if you just said 'what other a/s/d'....*runs away*)" *wicked cackle* hey, wait! come back here! tell me what other a/s/d fic! lmao you're such a tease!
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Date: 2007-01-26 08:48 pm (UTC)shhh. don't tell the others
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Date: 2007-01-26 08:54 pm (UTC)and while we're telling secrets, i'm working on a really... disturbing thing than i already know no one will beta for me. i know that you don't really beta, but would you take a look at it sometime? not right now, because i know you don't want to read anything heavy. also, it's not totally done. but it will be soon. it's making me a little insecure, and a second pair of eyes would be good. but don't feel pressured. i'm not even sure i'll post it at all.
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Date: 2007-01-26 09:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-26 10:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-02-22 07:17 am (UTC)...only Spike sees Dawn (who is only 2 years younger than Buffy in this 'verse) and convinces Angelus they should kidnap her instead, for fun and profit.
and, ahem, 40 pgs! did i read that correctly?
you, my dear are what is known as a clit tease! are you for real?! i'm salivating just imagining this scenario.
anyways, no pressure or anything (b/c you certainly must have enough to deal with right now), and i know i've fallen off the fic-reading wagon of late, but i'm letting you know here and now, should ever decide to post that puppy, i will be all over it like...something that's all over something else!
*fans self and reaches for a cigarette*
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Date: 2007-02-24 03:23 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-01-27 06:13 am (UTC)Re: Hot dang! A new chapter!
Date: 2007-01-27 06:14 am (UTC)glad you liked it, babe *hugs*
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Date: 2007-01-27 06:16 am (UTC)I'm glad you like my Dawn though! I love her, so I'm glad if I can spread the love :)
40 pages....sex, check...angst...probably not as much as the scenario calls for. lmao.
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Date: 2007-01-26 11:16 pm (UTC)i thought the fight scene was great, and it was really interesting to see the differences between how spike handled the girls, and how buffy handled them. i appreciated the 'gramps' thing, too....i think it's a hit.
ooooh, is cordy in love with angel in this? that line about how if he was sensible he would have fallen for her, no matter how 'lightly' she said it, made me think. not that she would ever admit it, cause she wants angel to be (not too) happy. i love cordy too, and the a/c dynamic. i felt personally violated when she got all evil. damn you, joss!
about the other a/s/d...now i'm all interested!
btw, i friended you...i thought i'd done it like forever ago, but i can be dumb and forgetful. :)
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Date: 2007-01-27 06:19 am (UTC)glad you liked the spike v buffy differences. there will be much more of that as the s7 plot progresses. somehow I don't see Spike being all speechified.
you know, I don't think Cordy is in love with him here, although it does feel like there's a certain amount of...wistfulness that it didn't work for them when they gave it a bit of a go. and omg, I felt personally violated by that too! still do. I have residual bitterness.
cool! I'll friend back :)
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Date: 2007-01-28 11:29 am (UTC)as for angel pet names, maybe "honey" lame i know but i can kinda see him saying it- exept more in a exasperated way rether than inderments, so maybe, "my sweet", "plossum", "grasshoper", "sunshine",
actully i just thought of something, angel is more the guy that would use maybe latin or french inderments rather than the standard english ones, so maybe translate something sweet and corney into something exotic and smoochie, i can see him murmering "mi sol"- my sunrise in spanish, "mon soleil" (french) or my favourit, "mon âme" my soul
if you bothered to read that rambling i hope it helped, good luck!
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Date: 2007-01-31 09:57 pm (UTC)thanks for the suggestions. I think other languages especially are something to explore.
rambling is good :) thanks!
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Date: 2007-01-28 12:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-31 09:57 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it!
i freaken love you
Date: 2007-01-31 08:48 pm (UTC)eponine24601@hotmial.com
Re: i freaken love you
Date: 2007-01-31 10:00 pm (UTC)feel free to friend if you have lj, or if not, hop on over to my meet and greet post and tell me a little about yourself! getting to know my readers is a pleasure.
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Date: 2007-02-01 11:54 pm (UTC)Keep up the good work. S/D/A- My 2 favourite het pairings.
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Date: 2007-02-02 03:06 pm (UTC)ah! very true! good point :)
thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it! you should go check out the new comm
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Date: 2007-02-02 06:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-02-02 03:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-02-27 08:30 pm (UTC)It's a term of endearment, and somewhat ironic in this case, hee!
Or... uhh... hrm... *thinks* I have no idea. I'm not good with terms of endearment. In highschool I called someone a jackass for a term of endearment... then again, he called me his bitch, so I guess it balanced out.
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Date: 2007-05-05 11:20 pm (UTC)As to the Angel/Dawn thing - I have deep reservations. I can't get into the mindset of a vampire, but as a human I have to say I feer things could get complicated.
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Date: 2007-05-13 03:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-14 06:14 pm (UTC)whoops. what's funny is I checked the spelling before I posted it, and I guess I didn't change it. thanks!