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ok, my porn muse has been all persnickety lately, so I'm still 3 chapters away from being done with this. thus, the updates remain slow. but I really like this chapter! good thing it was written back when the porn muse was being all cooperative. :)

Title: Wayward Boys
Author: Mel ([livejournal.com profile] btvslover82
Pairing: Angelus/Liam/Angel (you heard me, it’s tripletcest!). human AU
Rating: NC-17 for sure…
Summary: human AU. Angelus is determined to get both of his brothers back into his bed, where they belong.
Warnings: uh…incest, obviously. Can’t stress that enough. Some of the flashbacks deal with *early experimentation*. At some point, there will be bondage. And uh, angst. If I have to put additional warnings up later, I will by the chapter.
Disclaimer: these characters are sooo not mine. if they were, they would have been doing naughty things all along.

**An extra cover-my-ass warning: this fic deals with *human AU incest* among triplets. Although the boys are 22 in the majority of the fic, there is at least one flashback, maybe more, dealing with underage sex. In one, they are quite young (after puberty but not by much), and it is more for expository purposes than anything, but it is graphic. If you think this will bother you, run away now**




Previously:
Angel’s knees shook under his own weight, now that the desire had left him. He sagged against the door, and all was quiet inside.

Until he heard a little sound, barely perceptible. Angel couldn’t say what it was, or that he even fully registered it, until there was an audible shifting of bodies, and a murmur of “Don’t cry, Lee…please, don’t cry.”

After the acknowledgement, the sound of Liam’s weeping became undeniable. Unbearable. Inconsolable and ragged, just as they had been the day of their thirteenth birthday. Angel hadn’t heard Liam cry since that day. The day it had all begun.

Angel felt bile rise in his throat—at himself, at his brothers, at his complete and utter confusion. Most of all, at the sound of Liam’s heart breaking, which was all his fault. All his fault, and he didn’t know what was right anymore.

Angel turned and ran.





part 6

“Angelus, no that’s—I can’t do that. Don’t ask me to do that.” Liam felt a renewed wave of nausea when Angelus wasn’t budged by his pleading. He just stood, impassive, hand still wrapped around Liam’s arm, restraining him from making his trip towards the dresser.

Liam looked balefully at the bottle that was waiting for him. Only four feet from where he stood, but it might as well be miles.

When Liam turned back to his brother, Angelus’ eyes were a little harder. “I wasn’t asking.”

Liam tried to hold his rising panic in check. Angelus could be persuaded from something he wanted, if you knew how to go about it, and he’d been especially generous these last few weeks. Ever since that night that Liam had drank too much and taken their Angel-game too seriously. Liam was still a little embarrassed of his own reaction. A grown man shouldn’t act that way, but somehow with Angelus…. Anyway, he knew Angelus felt bad about making him cry, acting strange when Liam pointed out how scarce Angel had become recently. Angelus felt guilty, and Liam had milked it for all it was worth.

But it seemed like the charity had run out, in spades.

“C’mon, ‘Gelus, I swear I won’t overdo it this time. I just wanna wind down a little. Hard day at the office,” he joked, trying to schmooze his way into favor. They all knew that ‘Liam’ and ‘a hard day’s work’ didn’t belong in the same sentence. Ever.

Angelus didn’t crack a smile. “I said no. Period.” Liam gaped a bit at the flat response. “Listen to me, Lee. This is how it’s gonna be, take it or leave it. We do this sober, or we don’t do it at all. I’m sick of fucking a drunk.”

Liam cringed at that. “Gus,” he pleaded. The soft entreaty in his voice was far from put-on. His chest felt banded tight, nausea clawing up sickly from his gut. “I can’t do this without…. Please, don’t ask me. I can’t.”

An unfamiliar expression ghosted over Angelus’ face. A little slice of pain, there for only a split second before it was tucked away. “You can. I do.”

Liam’s stomach did a slow, sick roll to see the chink in his brother’s invincible armor. It was hard for him to tell, most of the time, how much of Angelus’ emotions were sincere and how much was careful manipulation, but Gus hadn’t meant to show him that. He wasn’t that good of actor.

Liam didn’t think Angelus would ever make good on his threat to cut him off. After all, wasn’t it Gus that had lured him back time and again when Liam tried to end this thing? He’d tried to walk away from it dozens of times over the years, but he didn’t have Angel’s conviction. He crumpled under the first seductive pressure.

He wasn’t Angel and he wasn’t Angelus. They’d both drawn a line, and stayed stubbornly on their own side. They knew what they wanted, no doubts. Liam was the one in the middle, yanked back and forth. Trapped between what he should do and what he wanted to do, in this guilty no-man’s land.

And he’d never wondered how it made Gus feel, that someone he loved could only stand to touch him when he had whiskey in his veins.

It was time to make a real decision. He just wished his heart wasn’t pounding hard enough to punch out of his rib cage.

“Yeah, ok. Sober.”

Angelus actually looked mildly surprised, like he hadn’t expected it to go so easy, but his restraining hand eased off of Liam’s arm. Liam looked away from the sharpness of his gaze, self-conscious and awkward. His arms felt like heavy, useless appendages—he had no clue what to do with them. He brought them up to clutch at his biceps, arms cradled against each other. Dropped them again and stuffed them into his pockets when he realized that it looked like he was hugging himself.

“So, um….” The whole situation felt distorted for being so clear and unfiltered. He went and sat on the edge of his bed, hands coming to lace together in his lap. Gus came to stand in front of him, and Liam’s eyes skittered to the belt in front of his face before flitting up to Angelus’ unreadable expression and away.

“Oh, for fuck’s sake, you look like a virgin on her wedding night.” Angelus’ tone was gruff, but there was no real roughness in the way that he pushed Liam back onto the mattress and settled himself on top.

Liam held his breath in the moment before the kiss, in the pause that felt important. He hadn’t so much as kissed his brother sober since they were 16. Since Angel had run out on them. Since it was thrown in his face once and for all what a sick abomination this was. The day that things had gotten weird around here, and had never gone back to being normal.

The press of Angelus’ mouth was uncharacteristically unassuming—not greedy. It was…grateful, and their eyes remained open as Angelus pushed them out deeper. Liam let his tongue in when it probed quietly at his lips, and he lifted his torso cooperatively for Gus to remove his shirt.

Liam’s breath hitched when Angelus reached for his fly, and he turned away from his brother’s kiss when a warm hand closed over his cock. He drew clean draughts of air into his lungs as Angelus kissed his throat, and his heart squeezed from the tenderness even though his gut was churning. The way that Gus fondled him was so familiar (hadn’t he been the first?), but it felt strange just now.

As clearly as if it were yesterday, he could hear his brother’s voice: you’re sinners. You’ll always be sinners. So much like Da that it cleaved the flesh from his bones.

Liam didn’t register his own stiffness until Angelus’ weight lifted and the other man climbed off the bed altogether. Liam sat up. “Gus?”

Angelus’ back remained turned on him, and one frustrated hand came up to rub through his hair. “Never mind. I don’t feel like it anymore.”

Well…that had sure as hell never happened before. “’Gelus?”

“I don’t fuck people who don’t want me, Liam.” He was sure that Angelus’ growl wasn’t supposed to sound more wounded than angry. Liam caught him by the arm as he charged from the room, yanking him back into a hard kiss.

This time it was Gus who tried to pull away, but Liam wouldn’t allow it. Couldn’t lose Angelus too. Wouldn’t. He backed Gus towards the bed, and for once it was Liam pushing his brother onto his back.

He pulled Gus’s shirt away mouthing at the muscle of his chest. The oddly soft skin of his belly. “I’m sorry,” he told it. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” until the flesh gave and relaxed. Until one big hand came down to rest on the top of Liam’s head and fingers carded through his hair fondly like forgiveness.

It was Liam who stripped off two pair of pants and slicked Angelus’ cock with an unsteady hand. Angelus just watched him, face soft and eyes sharp.

It wasn’t until Liam straddled Gus’s hips and bore down on his cock without ever touching himself that Angelus struggled to sit up.

Liam pushed him back down. “No, I’m ok,” he panted, but Gus was clearly skeptical. It did hurt. There was a burn as he sank down on Angelus, but they’d been fucking more frequently, so it wasn’t too bad. He welcomed the small measure of pain…he was normally so dulled by the alcohol. He needed it.

When he came to a rest against Angelus’ hips, he had to blink back the sheen of pain from his eyes. Angelus was watching him. “Lee—”

For five seconds of his life, he didn’t want to be the baby, the one that needed looking after. So Liam leaned in and kissed Angelus, and once he had his attention, began to work himself slowly on Gus’s cock until his body relaxed into the task.

But Liam kept it slow. Cupped Gus’s face in hands that were just as large as the ones running down his back and teased him his way with his tongue. It was so hard to get Angelus to be this way with him, he wouldn’t give up the opportunity now that he had it.

“I’m sorry,” he murmured again, rocking their bodies together a little faster.

Angelus’ hands tightened into his hair. “Liam, don’t—” Broke off on a groan when Liam sat up and began fucking him in earnest, hands curling into the lightly haired muscle of Gus’s thighs as he rode him, panting. His hair fell in his face as he watched the features so like his own contort and curse, and it wasn’t long before Angelus’ hands found a firm grip on Liam’s hips.

“’Gelus…Christ, I love it when you fuck me….”

One minute Liam was undulating on Gus’s lap getting off on the control and the next he was flat on his back being driven into by a man whose face was dark with lust. He couldn’t say he was complaining about the shift, especially when Angelus hefted his legs over his shoulders and bent him in half, thrusting deep.

Liam shouted hoarsely and dug his nails into his brother’s shoulders as Angelus took hold of his cock and quickly pulled him off, eyes boring down into his. His eyes rolled back just as Gus rammed home one final time, and when their hearts were both hammering in the sudden silence, Liam felt like things were simple again, for the moment.

Lately those moments never lasted long.

~*~*~*~*~

“I’m going away for a while.”

It was classic Angelus, with none of the softness of their earlier encounter. Abrupt and frank. Liam felt ambushed.

“Wh…for how long?”

“A few weeks. Darla wants to take a trip to New York, get a room with a view. Get away for a bit.”

“Oh.” Darla was the closest thing Angelus had ever had to a steady girlfriend. There was no real fidelity between them but they knew it, and there was an understanding of sorts there. Liam found her a bit intimidating but he was strangely drawn to her, even though she didn’t respect him like she did Gus.

Angel hated her guts.

But the bottom line was that if Darla wanted to go to New York, she and Angelus were going to New York. There was no point in Liam even arguing. Even if a few weeks did sound like eternity, and he had no idea what he’d do. Gus had been around so much lately.

“When are you leaving?”

“Oh, tomorrow I should think.”

“Tomorrow!” Liam pulled away from Angelus. The air still smelled heavily of sex, and tomorrow Gus would be gone. That’s what this had been about then…one last game to bend Liam’s will before Angelus ran off with his girlfriend. “You should have told me sooner.”

“Why, so you could pout about it for days? Sometimes you can be as bad as Angel, when you get your teeth in something.”

Liam turned away, ignoring the fact that he was pouting even as Angelus spoke. “What am I supposed to do?”

“Come on, Lee, don’t be such a drama queen. You’ve been blowing off your buddies for weeks, call them up. I’ll be back before the hangover’s worn off.”

“That’s not what I meant and you know it.”

“Yeah, I know it.” Gus pulled him back up the bed with an arm around his waist, and Liam let him. When he was leaned back against the headboard, he risked a pouty glance down at Angelus, who was propped up on one elbow beside him.

“You know, I’m not the only brother that has the hots for you around here,” Gus said finally, and before Liam could say anything, he was biting and licking the tender skin on the side of Liam’s ribs, kick-starting his breath faster.

“Yeah right, Angel’s not—”

“You and I both know better, Lee. You think he stopped wanting you that day? Hell no. Why do you think he’s such an uptight son of a bitch? He may have convinced himself he hates my guts, but he misses you, baby brother.”

Liam didn’t say anything, just chewed his lip. Angelus was rarely wrong when it came to people, but he remembered how it had gone the last time he’d gotten brave enough to come on to Angel.

“If anyone can bring him back into the fold, it’s you, Lee. He’d sooner spit than look at me. You’re it, if we ever want him back again.”

“Because that went so well last time. He ran away.”

Angelus smirked and looked up at him with hot mischief, mouth tickling Liam’s ribs. “Then you’ll just have to find a way to keep him still, won’t you?”

ch 7, in which prey becomes predator…sorta.

Date: 2007-02-10 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denied-heaven.livejournal.com
*swallows*
ungh.. woah haha
GOD why do liam and angelus make me like.. ache and get teary?
i mean, its so damn hot.. so hot
but *rubs eyes*
*kicks angel in the nuts* i know, i know.. but still
he's huurttinggg liaammm
*loves liam so hard*

Date: 2007-02-11 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
aww, I like that I made you ache and get teary for Liam and Angelus. they're so sweet :/

haha. *gives Angel a cup* don't worry, Angel will be changing his tune shortly.

*loves Liam with you* err...that sounded wrong.

Date: 2007-02-10 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyghtpet.livejournal.com
Oh Jaysus cheese and crackers.
*dives into cold shower*
Good lord, Liam fucking himself and the soberness and the whole....gah just that whole scene, haha
And then Angelus is just gonna LEAVE??? WTF????? *smacks him around a lil but cannot wait to see what clever Liam does*
Have I told you lately how much I love this fic? lol
*squishes to pieces*

Date: 2007-02-11 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol. hee. I'm glad you enjoyed the hotness.

yeah, I know, that was kind of a sucker punch for Angelus to announce that. hee. I'm sure Liam will think up something. *is angelic*

glad you love this, babe. *hugs*

Date: 2007-02-10 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daedream-fanbot.livejournal.com
I'm looking forward to a tentative and clumsy seduction of Angel.

Date: 2007-02-11 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol. clumsy is right. we'll see how tentative :)

Date: 2007-02-11 12:23 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Damn, that was just awesome!!!!!!! (as usual) SOOOOOO looking forward to more, please update soon!!!

Date: 2007-02-11 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it :)

Date: 2007-02-11 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toiffag.livejournal.com
oh. OH!!!!

lol, I'm so tired right now, and these impossibly annoying people in the appartment opposite mine are having a party (1:30 am) WITH the windows OPEN and they're so fucking noisy they woke me up; so I was like "okay, I'll just turn my computer on, but I'm so depressed even, *even* a WWB update wouldn't make me happy."

And then there it was.
And I was like *shrug*"okay, fuck it, I was wrong, HEEEEEEEEE!!!" *pounces on link*

So happy so so so so happy!!! THANK YOU!!!

Very glad that Liam finally got his head out of his butt (so many puns possible, so little time...^^) and did that for Angelus, and very happy that he saw some kind of vulnerability...

Liked Angelus's reaction to Liam's stiffening (hee, more pun material!), but very upset about Angelus leaving :(

Hee I wanna see Darla!!!! Liked how you described Liam and angel's reactions to her too...

Hope Liam doesn't mess everything up...

“Then you’ll just have to find a way to keep him still, won’t you
HM.

What, is he gonna use the chains? ^^

Oh so well done, hope you feel better about the porn writing, I'm counting on my bunny!porn fix!!Angel+bunny!!!ew, actually...
:D

Date: 2007-02-11 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I'm glad you got a kick out of seeing it on your flist :)

Angelus has a softer underbelly than he lets on :) I think Liam was just too caught up in his own angst to see it, but he probably actually feels better for knowing it's there, now.

not sure that Darla will be making an actual appearance, but I'm glad you enjoyed their reactions to her.

*cough* yeah we'll see. hahaha.

Date: 2007-02-11 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jans-intentions.livejournal.com
hahaha, he's so evil. I like his vulnerability though.

Date: 2007-02-11 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
lol, he is. he's a bad boy. I kind of love him. I'm glad you liked his vulnerability here.

Date: 2007-02-11 06:41 am (UTC)
laisserais: kiss (family)
From: [personal profile] laisserais
"And he’d never wondered how it made Gus feel, that someone he loved could only stand to touch him when he had whiskey in his veins. " i love how you set this up, showing the spectrum Liam's caught between, and how he notices a real emotion from Angelus. who really seems to want this, more than just for the power trip.

"The oddly soft skin of his belly. “I’m sorry,” he told it. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” until the flesh gave and relaxed." this was beautiful. and an interesting development. Is Angelus being sincere? Or does he just want Liam to believe that he's mad? hmm.

i loved the three boys' reactions to darla. lol, that was dead-perfect. no real fidelity between angelus and her, hee!

and that last line? whew! sooo nice. hot mischief - totally! Liam hast to go tie up angel when he's in bed! like, now! lmao

Date: 2007-02-11 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks, I'm glad you ennjoyed the bit of vulnerability and the discussion of their differences. though I think Liam's probably got a skewed vision of just how certain his brothers are :)

I think Angelus does want it for more than the power trip, and that he really was upset by his rejection. he's a bit soft for them, really. not that you'd know it. lol.

I'm glad you loved their reactions to Darla. haha, I really liked that part myself.

hee. I have evil plans up my sleeve.

“You can. I do.”

Date: 2007-02-11 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incasink.livejournal.com
Ah indeed. I loved seeing the vulnerabililty, one last thing before 'Gus went away, seating himself firmly in Liam's mind and heart so he'd stick in his absence.

He was sure that Angelus’ growl wasn’t supposed to sound more wounded than angry. I suppose it's very important to each that they act the way they are known to act. Angelus is the paternal figure, Liam's the 'baby', Angel's the grey area -the voice of society, of common human morals and all the good that goes with that. If any one of them crumbles then what happens? Liam took over Angelus for a little while, being the carer until 'Gus could slip back into his own role.

Liam found her a bit intimidating but he was strangely drawn to her *muahahaha* liked it.

“Because that went so well last time. He ran away.”

Hmmm but that was before the whole incessant masturbation, right?


*feels rejuvinated after 2 chapters*

Re: “You can. I do.”

Date: 2007-02-11 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I'm glad you like Angelus' vulnerability here. he's not as tough as he likes to look, when it comes to his brothers. it's a scary thing, going out on a limb and twisting their arms back to where he wants them. big possibility of rejection. boy's got baggage like the rest of them, he just covers it better :)

because yes! I agree that they all feel as though they have their roles to fill, and they totally play into that
If any one of them crumbles then what happens?
could it turn out that they are really so similar that they are one integrated person? *cough* who knows ;)

haha glad you liked the line about Liam and Darla. one of my faves.

yeah, the running away was before the voyeurism, but Liam doesn't know about that. Angelus was the only one who knew they were being watched, so from Liam's perspective, nothing has changed.

glad to make you feel a little better :)
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Date: 2007-02-11 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it, sweetie. thanks for giving it a chance, and I'm glad you love Liam. *hugs*

Wayward Boys Ch 6

Date: 2007-02-11 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com
Wow, another scorchingly good chapter.

I like that Liam realised that he was hurting Angelus by insisting on the illusion of drunkenness. I think the emotions that he glimpsed in Angleus were real, it wasn't Angelus playing Liam.

However, the trip to New York, now *that's* Angelus playing Liam *and* Angel. I'm *soooo* looking forward to how seeing if Liam ties Angel to the bed/how he seduces him! :-)

Re: Wayward Boys Ch 6

Date: 2007-02-12 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
ah, thank you! I'm glad you like it.

yeah I think that Angelus genuinely cares for them, and he's just as touchy about rejection as the rest of them, he's just all about the bravado. and the going away is totally a mindfuck. lol. although i'm sure it was darla's idea to go to NY and he was just seizing a good opportunity :)

hee. Liam's god his work cut out for him

Date: 2007-02-12 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spankspike.livejournal.com
OMG - I got so excited when I saw this had gone up.

If it was hot all the other times Angelus and Liam were together, it was made even more so by the fact that Liam finally agreed to stay sober during. And I was pretty impressed by Angelus' insistence that he had to do it.

“I can’t do this without…. Please, don’t ask me. I can’t.”

An unfamiliar expression ghosted over Angelus’ face. A little slice of pain, there for only a split second before it was tucked away. “You can. I do.”


It was good to see that little bit of Angelus' underbelly, and how painful it must be for him to be the only one who has the guts to bet with the ones he loves without anything to ease the way. It must have really hit home when Liam implied he couldn't get through it without drinking. And I was glad that Liam saw it too, and he decided to give it a try.

“’Gelus…Christ, I love it when you fuck me….”

Yeah - that was just fucking hot! If I talk about it any more than that I'll need a second chapter.

And I'm so hoping that Angel will give in to Liam with Angelus away!

Still loving this one!

Date: 2007-02-12 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
heehee.

I think it was about time Liam stopped using booze as a crutch...Angelus had grown uncomfortable with that a while back. I think it was/is painful for him that he's the only one with the guts to do this thing and not be all conflicted about it, you know? he knows what he wants and I think he kind of doesn't get why they don't. I'm glad you liked his bit of vulnerability here.

and of course, glad that my porn was hot :)

we'll see what happens! :D

*hugs*

So...

Date: 2007-02-12 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarahthebloody.livejournal.com
I was unsure if I should read this fic or not since it involves the brother-loving kind. I read the warnings very carefully and decided not to do it and I clicked the fic away. But then I clicked back to it. And then accidentally (of course) my finger pushed the button and threw me into the first chapter. So here I am after all 6 chapters and... well... I want more!

It's a very good story. Dirty because they're triplets but I can't help it, I love it! I feel guilty like Angel, because it's wrong. But still he pulls his cock outside the door. Though I don't do that exactly... (mostly because I don't have one!) ;P

Aaanyway, I think you portrait all three characters very well. And the fucks are really hot, I love how demanding Angelus is and that Liam actually took charge the last time! (pat's his head)

What I find really interesting is that Angelus gets even hotter when he knows that Angel is listening in on them and touching himself. The feeling I get of Angelus is that he really wants Angel. Angel is resisting and by that Angelus kind of wants to 'own' him in some way, make him 'his'. I don't know how to explain it really. But I hope you understand what I mean anyway? :P

And their different reactions to Darla was funny :0)

So, though I resisted at first I gave in and read this fic and I don't regret it for a second, it's so damn hot! (kind of hopes Angel will follow my lead and give in already!;P)
I'm hoping there will be a new chapter up soon, can't wait to see what happens when Angelus leaves the house. *squeaks*

// S.T.B.

Re: So...

Date: 2007-02-12 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks so much for giving this fic a shot! I'm glad that it came through. I think half the charm of incest fic is for it to make you want the relationship even though it makes you feel kinda dirty, lol. though I think it seems to me that people are having an easier time with these guys because in canon they were all one person.

I'm glad you like the way I've characterized each of them. it was such a bitch to pull him out into three separate characters...I had to do some creative wrangling with Liam, so I think he's kind of softer than he was in canon, but that's ok. glad you liked their reactions to Darla! I thought that was funny myself.

I totally get what you mean about Angelus/Angel. they've definitely got their own special flavor of something going on, and I think folks will maybe be surprised when we get to their time.

glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2007-02-14 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emu-stand-bi.livejournal.com
yay, another update :D This fic is one of those fics that I always get heaps excited about... (u know the ones I mean right?)

I can't wait to see how Liam keeps Angel 'still' long enough for him to...do...stuff...to :)

I feel bad for Angelus:

He may have convinced himself he hates my guts,

and this:

He’d sooner spit than look at me.

:( I think that effects him more than he lets on...poor guy. (heh...never thought I'd say that about Angelus...but whatever lol)

btw loved the mention of Darla:

Angel hated her guts.

hehehe.

anyway, great chap, as always loved :)

Date: 2007-02-15 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
awww, I'm so glad you get excited about it! *squishes you*

heehee, yeah he's a naughty boy, encouraging Liam to uh...immobilize Angel. I'm glad you feel for my Angelus. he has a bit of an underbelly in this fic. I couldn't make him human and not make him a little vulnerable :)

I'm so glad the Darla bit seems to be a hit with everyone, thanks! *hugs*

Date: 2007-04-15 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
Darla! Sorry, I do have a little Darla obsession, so it was nice to see her make a cameo. Well sort of. And I love the hits you have us of how she reacts to the three brothers. You know Angelus should really bring her by the apartment some time, I'm sure she'd be up for a three or foursome ;)

Okay so that's not really what this story is about. And Darla wasn't the best part, the best part was Liam realizing how he had hurt Angelus and his attempts to overcome it. That was just so touching.

I do have to wonder if New York was really Darla's idea, or if Angelus is just making an excuse in the hopes that Liam will be able to tempt Angel.

Date: 2007-04-16 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee, I liked putting Darla in there. glad you liked seeing all their reactions to her. and yeah, haha, I'm sure Darla would be up for that. though I'm saving the foursome for someone else. *shifty eyes towards Spike*

I'm glad you liked the bits of Liam/Angelus tenderness.

I do have to wonder if New York was really Darla's idea, or if Angelus is just making an excuse in the hopes that Liam will be able to tempt Angel.
you know, that is something even I'm not sure of. I could see it either way, really.

Date: 2007-04-16 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
Hmmm. . . one Spike, three Angels. . . Yeah I can live with that ;)

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