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I'm still banging my head up against parts 11 and 12. really, part 11. I don't know why it's so hard to get all three of them in bed together, but it is. *frowns at them* they want it, I know they do.

Title: Wayward Boys
Author: Mel ([livejournal.com profile] btvslover82)
Pairing: Angelus/Liam/Angel. human AU tripletcest
Rating: NC-17 for sure…
Summary: human AU. Angelus is determined to get both of his brothers back into his bed, where they belong.
Warnings: uh…incest, obviously. Can’t stress that enough. Some of the flashbacks deal with *early experimentation*. At some point, there will be bondage. And uh, angst. If I have to put additional warnings up later, I will by the chapter.
Disclaimer: these characters are sooo not mine. if they were, there really would have been three of them.



Previously:
Tears in his eyes, Angel pulled the sleeping boy—man—closer to him, feeling heartsick and grateful for the way Liam had never closed him out. He would let Liam into his bed. If this was what it took for his brother to sleep right, he’d give him that much until Angelus came back.

It was the least he could do.



Part 8

When Angel slept, he looked just like Angelus.

Liam had forgotten about that…how very much they all looked alike. Years had passed since he’d slept beside Angel, and in waking, his brothers looked nothing alike. So different in the way they talked…the way they carried themselves…their facial expressions and general demeanor.

But when they were sleeping, they both looked…warm. Safe. Like lions, big and fierce and protective. Liam thought about the way Angel had draped heavy, possessive limbs over him in sleep for the last four nights, unconsciously tugging him closer as he snored.

He ached a little, to think about it.

Angel would be a whole different kind of fierce when he realized what Liam was about to do. If it was Angelus’ wrist he was slowly closing a handcuff around, he’d consider himself a dead man.

Liam carefully threaded the chain of the cuffs through the headboard and back around, gently trapping his brother’s other wrist. He breathed a little easier when the bracelet clicked closed and Angel’s steady rhythm of breathing hadn’t changed.

He was so nervous that his hands shook just a little as he peeled Angel’s sweats off his body, dragging them out from under his ass as he tugged them down over his hips. Ang stirred a little at that, but then quieted.

Liam trailed a wistful finger along Angel’s shaft, heart constricting before he dipped his head to close his lips around the underside of his brother’s cock, sucking slightly on the edge of the head. Angel hummed and shifted, legs sprawling a little wider as his pelvis pressed upward in unconscious invitation. It was all so familiar, from another lifetime when they were all little more than children playing games. Ones that they thought couldn’t hurt anyone, until something inside of Angel shattered. None of them had come away unscathed.

Heart hammering too hard to play a teasing game, Liam angled the thick cock up towards his mouth and sucked on the reddish helmet, swallowing more of Angel as his tongue swirled at the familiar taste. The texture. It had been six years, but it was so familiar. From Angelus. From his dreams.

Angel moaned, hips rolling up into the sensation. “Ohh god…Liam….”

Liam froze, startled…even moreso when he realized that Angel was still asleep. Did Angel…dream about him? The thought made his eyes burn a little, but he quickly pushed the thought away.

Angel was stirring from sleep, body agitating with increasing frequency as Liam worked him. When his body suddenly jerked awake, hands yanking at his restraints, Liam didn’t stop…instead, intensified the suction…increased the rate at which his mouth pulled and sank, hoping to distract Angel from the protest he was sure to make.

“Liam—” Angel gasped and arched up, body bucking in pleasure. Metal rattled against wood roughly as he tried to free himself. “Lee, let me out of these fucking cuffs.”

Liam refused to look up at him, concentrating on the job at hand. “Hm-mmm.” Angel swore at the vibration around his flesh, hips flexing upwards, and Liam quelled the urge to snicker. Angel had always been a little ticklish when it came to that.

Avoiding eye contact, Liam laved down Angel’s shaft messily, enjoying the way Angel moaned and strained at the cuffs in a manner that had nothing to do with escape. He tilted his head as he sucked one of Angel’s balls into his mouth, hot and wet, tongue laving over the salty, lightly haired skin.

Angel arched up, head thrown back in a cry of surprise, and while he was distracted, Liam allowed himself to look. To appreciate the tight smooth musculature he’d developed since Liam had last seen him naked…the result of what Gus called the Repression Routine. He quickly looked away as Angel’s face turned towards him again.

“Lee….” His name was more of a moan than anything as he nipped at Angel’s sac, tugging lightly at the flesh until Angel’s breath was hitching. The acknowledgement of Liam made his head feel light and giddy. Made his cock flex.

He rolled Angel’s legs up, groping the thick muscles of his thighs as he rimmed the tight pucker, moaning when his brother’s body bucked in shock with a high, constricted sound. He’d never done this to Angel. He’d never done it to Angelus. Couldn’t imagine Gus allowing such a vulnerable thing, even cuffed. He’d picked it up…elsewhere.

Spike might be toppy, but he was a kinky bastard. Especially when he was trashed.

But Angel seemed to enjoy it, so much so that when Liam eased him back onto the bed and closed his lips around the excitement-flushed cock, Angel gasped like he’d been burned. And when Liam deep-throated him—remembering how his early attempts had always made Angel’s eyes roll back in his head and wanting so badly to be enough, to be more—Angel’s hips shot off the bed and he swore in a sob of surprise, and Liam had to squeeze off the orgasm slamming into his triplet’s body.

When Liam finally sat up, he met the face turned down towards his, flushed with lust and sleep. He crawled up the bed, laying his fingers over Angel’s mouth when he opened it to speak before replacing them with his lips. Angel made a plaintive little sound at the slow, almost innocent kiss, and it grew into a moan when Liam lowered his naked body, undulating his hips against Angel’s.

Liam got caught up in the slide of skin, heat flooding up from his groin as his cock slid against Angel’s on a film of their pre-come. They were both well on their way to frotting themselves to completion when he remembered his purpose and drew his knees up under his body. Before Angel could register his intention, he reached back to steady his brother’s erection as he bore down quickly, taking it into his own body.

One of them groaned. Liam had been ready—more than, and he’d made sure of that—but Angel had obviously been unprepared for this turn of events, and his body convulsed, jaw clamped as he fought for control, eyes flickering under his eyelids.

When the out-of-control spasms had gentled into trembling muscles, Liam leaned in to kiss him, accepting the teeth that sank into his bottom lip fiercely and welcoming the gentler slide of a tongue. They were both panting against each other, and when Angel’s eyes opened, they were hot and ferocious.

“Liam, unlock these cuffs.”

He flinched at the rejection, eyes closing against the gathering moisture, and shook his head. “No,” he murmured, in case there was any doubt.

“Lee—”

“No,” he repeated, soft but firm, rolling his hips to remind them both who was in control at the moment. Angel just had to remember…that it could feel so good. That he didn’t always have to do the right thing and…that life was better this way. Liam just had to remind him.

Gut churning at the knowledge that even in the heat of things Angel didn’t want him, Liam sat up, eyes shut against his self-consciousness as he began to ride him. God it felt so good. He focused on the heaviness of Angel’s breath, the little sighing moaning grunting noises he made as Liam undulated in his lap faster and faster. Angel murmured his name, and Liam could almost pretend that he wanted this. That he didn’t have to be forced into it.

That everything was different and they lived somewhere where no one cared that they did this. No one thought it was dirty and disgusting, and his brothers didn’t hate each other, and they loved him and let him love them, and things were perfect….

Liam took hold of his cock and began jerking himself, enjoying the fantasy and the real life fuck, slitting his eyes open to look down at Angel as he breathed hard and fast. Angel’s face was dark, intense, and Liam swallowed, unsure what he was thinking.

“Lee. C’mere.”

He hesitated a moment but then Angel bucked his hips hard and Liam cried out as it knocked him forward, and when his mouth was taken in a hungry kiss, he melted with relief. He moaned with surprise into the softly dominating mouth as Angel thrust into him, thighs straining for leverage as he maintained the pace that Liam had set, fucking him harder, faster.

Liam broke the kiss with a gasp, bracing himself so he could push his body against the strokes, hips clashing with Angel’s again and again as they worked themselves up to mindlessness. So good. Too good….

“Ah…Ang….” Liam reached back to fist his cock furiously, muscles coiling until they couldn’t possibly get tighter, and there was a moment where he was stuck on the brink, helpless.

But then Angel ground up against him, coming with a choked moan…looking right at Liam as he filled him with warmth. Looking right at him, murmuring his name.

Liam exploded.

Their hips continued to move restlessly together as they both came down from the aftershocks, Liam bracing himself heavily on one hand. He felt achy, already hollow as Angel’s soft cock slipped from his body.

It had been so good, but he knew it would never happen again. Angel was going to be so pissed, now that his head was clear, and Liam didn’t know if he could go back to the way things used to be.

Angel stared up at him inscrutably for a measureless length of time, while Liam chose to focus somewhere on his left cheek. When he finally spoke, his voice was low. “Let me out of these cuffs.”

Liam cringed, anticipating Angel’s flight. “Angel, please, we don’t have to—”

“Liam. Let me out of these cuffs. Now.” Angel’s voice carried the weight of an aggravated parent, an impending threat clinging to the end of the sentence. Putting it off was only going to make things worse.

Liam sat up and reached for the key on the bedside table, unlocking the cuffs with dread. Preparing himself for getting kicked out. For getting left behind. For getting told he was too sick to be loved. Angel sat up and rubbed at his wrists, studying Liam’s face until Liam looked away.

When Angel lay back and stretched out his arm in welcome, Liam stared at him—confused and off-balance. “Angel?”

Angel’s mouth tipped up in a tentative smile, even though he still looked troubled. “C’mere, Liam.” When Liam still hesitated, Angel added, “It’s alright, Lee, I’m not angry. C’mere.”

He pulled Liam down onto the bed and rolled them until they were fitted together on their sides. Angel’s arm squeezed reassuringly at his waist, and his breath was warm and gentle at the nape of Liam’s neck.

Liam shuddered with a swell of uncertain emotion. Angel pressed a kiss to his skin. “Go to sleep, Lee. I’m not mad.”

He drifted off to sleep, not entirely certain he wasn’t dreaming already.

TBC

Wayward Boys Ch 8

Date: 2007-03-11 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com
Naughty, naughty Liam! Angelus' scheming paid off ... big time!

Thank god! Angel would have absolutely destroyed Liam if he'd rejected him at the end. Sooo glad he 'did the right thing' and welcomed his little brother into his arms. Feeling happy for the boys and hopeful for their future (for all three of them). *pets Liam and Angel*

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Re: Wayward Boys Ch 8

Date: 2007-03-11 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee! yes, Angelus planted the seeds and Liam made them grow. Angel...fertilized them or something, and this analogy goes nowhere good :P

yes, it would've destroyed Liam. his self-esteem is already tender where Angel is concerned.

thanks! if I can finish the damn fic, it would be posted soon. lol. sweet-talk the muse for me.

Date: 2007-03-11 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiny-n-new.livejournal.com
*melts* Aww, how sweet and hawt! Liam would have been completely devastated if Angel had thrown him out. I wonder how Angelus is going to react when he gets back...

Date: 2007-03-11 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks! he would have been.

guess we'll see o_O

Date: 2007-03-11 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spankspike.livejournal.com
OMG! That was so perfect. I loved Liam's desperate little scheme, though it was a little sad that he was assuming through the whole thing that it would be the only time it would happen.

“Lee. C’mere.”

That made my heart so hopeful, but I was still worried that it was just a heat of the moment type thing. I couldn't believe it when it was all over and Angel wasn't mad. I can't blame Liam for wondering if he was already dreaming. But now I'm worried about the aftermath of this situation.

And is Spike gonna be involved here somewhere? Or was that just a tiny reference to where Liam learned some of his best naughty skills.

He rolled Angel’s legs up, groping the thick muscles of his thighs as he rimmed the tight pucker, moaning when his brother’s body bucked in shock with a high, constricted sound.

That - was so hot!

Date: 2007-03-11 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I know, poor little guy *pets him* but also, props to him for going through with it.

I can understand why you're worried. Angel's been very intractable.

lmao, Spike...*shifty eyes* he won't really be involved in the fic proper. but he does exist in this 'verse. I might have a plan for him. you know I couldn't leave him out in the cold...3 Angels is his wet dream. *cough*

thanks! I'm glad you enjoy this story *squishes you*

Date: 2007-03-11 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denied-heaven.livejournal.com
i have tears! *shows you tears*
how does this always end up making me cry haha
i loved this LOVED it
liams nervousness, him bein so scared of rejection and doin it anyway
the omfg hotness
and and
god i ached for him so hard in the end and i don't have to kill angel! cuz he did good!
*wipes eyes*
god i love this lol

Date: 2007-03-11 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
*snuggles you* I love that Liam touches you that much, I really do. *squish*

poor little guy. he certainly has a basis to be scared of rejection from past experience with Angel. but this time he did good! yay Angel! haha. I'm glad it was hot.

Date: 2007-03-11 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlpire.livejournal.com
okay, this is the hottest chapter so far! *loves*

but yeah, i can see how it could be a problem getting angel and angelus into the same bed together. maybe they can just hide on either side of liam and pretend the other one isn't there?

Date: 2007-03-11 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
reeeaaaallllyyy? yay!

yeah, ironically, that is not the part that is difficult *cough* mostly it's just my own issues. I had an outline in my head for chapter 11, and then I just got paranoid about it and decided it didn't work. it was like I've been trying to have a wee bit of meta running under the surface the whole time and then it just bottomed out for the ending, so I'm having to rethink.

Date: 2007-03-11 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lokapala.livejournal.com
Wow. Nice. Unexpectedly soon, but that doesn't diminish the hotness =)
The unexpectedness makes me fear Angel freaking in the morning. We're going to see his POV, right?

What makes it difficult for all three of them to get together? Angel and Angelus getting carried away with pride and prejudice? :))

Date: 2007-03-11 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yeah, once Liam got the ball rolling I think he had to do it before he chickened out. I'm glad it was hot.

we'll see what Angel does. :)

yeah, Angel and Angelus aren't so much the problem. just, I had a plan, decided I didn't like it, and now I'm starting over from scratch, so it's just kind of blank in my mind. nothing scarier to a writer than blankness. *scribbles on it*

Date: 2007-03-11 09:10 pm (UTC)
laisserais: kiss (angel - in the sun)
From: [personal profile] laisserais
The thought made his eyes burn a little, but he quickly pushed the thought away. oh man. you made my heart constrict and my eyes burn. i'm all torn up. liam. wanting to be wanted. this is so well done that i completely get swept up in it, and forget how wildly inappropriate it should be. i just want liam to be happy. and this: and wanting so badly to be enough, to be more oh! just... *sigh* oh.

i loved how we get liam's perspective on how angel just seemed to have broken. and that (hee!) he picked up a few tricks from spike. he's gotta be in here, too. *g*

and i wonder what's going on in angel's head right now? now that he's effectively been raped. or maybe just had that barrier broken- the one he wanted gone. not having a choice always makes the choice easier. *makes thinky face* so much going on there. it's beautiful.

and finally, i loved how angel's consistent refrain of "let me out of these cuffs" seems to kind of change, until finally, he is let go and he doesn't run. i think if liam had let him go earlier, he may have run.

goes off to find a tissue and a hug.

Date: 2007-03-11 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
oh man. you made my heart constrict and my eyes burn. i'm all torn up.
aww, honey. *secret glee* he's so...he's got an underbelly, our Liam. I think he did in canon, he just didn't show it to anyone. and I'm sure in this 'verse, he doesn't show it to anyone but his brothers. and possibly Spike *shifty eyes* of course he's gotta be there!

now that he's effectively been raped. or maybe just had that barrier broken- the one he wanted gone. not having a choice always makes the choice easier. *makes thinky face* so much going on there. it's beautiful.
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'd say it's more the second situation than the first. if it had been Angelus, I think he would have felt raped...or would have been more likely to feel that way. but Liam's the baby, and I think no matter the situation, Angel will always feel a little responsible to him.

*squishes you and hands you a hanky*
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Date: 2007-03-12 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
hee! don't die yet!

thanks :)

Date: 2007-03-12 07:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incasink.livejournal.com
Awwwww Liam's little ploy. Awwwww.

... SPIKE MENTION. Hot.

Im seeing some sort of connection with Angelus being in Liam's head to shackle Angel, like *thats* what holds him down, but its a little too far out of my reach, the congnizant idea of it blocked by the RIMMING.

luff.

But EXPLOSION when Angelus gets back!

Date: 2007-03-12 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yeah, he was trying to be sneaky. not exactly subtle though, lol.

haha. Spike is um. *shifty eyes*

Angelus' return should be...interesting. *cough* he's certainly had an influence on Liam :)

Date: 2007-03-12 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelstoy.livejournal.com
Holy crap that was hot!!!! Ya gotta love a tied up Angel!!!!

CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS AWESOME, AWESOME STORY!!!

Date: 2007-03-12 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
heee. I do enjoy tying Angel up. he's so purdy. glad you're enjoying it!

Date: 2007-03-12 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dark-hunterjenn.livejournal.com
Wow, and...yum. Sweet and hot, just the way it should be!

Date: 2007-03-13 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2007-03-12 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jans-intentions.livejournal.com
Aw, so hot and sweet. Wonderful, hon!

Date: 2007-03-13 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks babe! I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2007-03-13 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emu-stand-bi.livejournal.com
“Go to sleep, Lee. I’m not mad.”

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I loved Angel in this :D I wanna hug him.

Liam's 'seduction' was...pretty cute...and the way he stayed in control, not giving in when Angel told him to let him go...yay :) Great chap, loved it. Really looking forward to seeing what happens when Angelus gets back :)

Date: 2007-03-13 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I know! he finally got it right. and totally, good for Liam! I think he's not as you know...pitiful as his brothers think he is. I'm glad you enjoyed his rather blunt seduction.

thanks!

Date: 2007-03-13 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyghtpet.livejournal.com
*snuffles and cuddles poor Lee all up*
*snickers that you managed to get Spike up in this* I love you for that, btw. That was awesome.
*eyes Angel and warns him he better not bail and hurt poor Lee again*
This is without a doubt my favorite story of yours, girl. So hot and chockful of emotion and all kinkyyyyyyy
Woo!
*hugs you so hard*

Date: 2007-03-13 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
haha, how could I leave Spike out? I couldn't, that's how. :D

don't worry, I'm gonna hog-tie Angel. even if he wanted to, he ain't goin nowhere.

I'm so glad you enjoy this one so much, babe. I'm very pleased with it. *hugs*

Date: 2007-03-13 07:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toiffag.livejournal.com
But when they were sleeping, they both looked…warm. Safe. Like lions, big and fierce and protective.
Oooh, he so needs his protection…
my boyfriend looks like he’s 10years old when he sleeps *headdesk*I wish he were a lion…
About the protective part, I still remember something you said about angelus getting mad at spike for hitting on liam.

Which leads me to…He’d picked it up…elsewhere.

Spike might be toppy, but he was a kinky bastard. Especially when he was trashed.

Omg, you so got to everyone with that one !!!!!
Now you absolutely have to do something about it !!! But anyway, I *was* wondering, I know that Angelus sleeps around, but what about Liam ??
Is he « allowed » ? ‘Cuz Angelus didn’t really seem the type to just let his « possession » get fucked by spike… I’m waiting for you to write this !!!!! :D *so completely brainfried by the spike part*

Liam quelled the urge to snicker. Angel had always been a little ticklish when it came to that.
mhahahaha !!!!! thats so funny !! But dangerous !! Isn’t that the quickest way to lose your dick, moving unexpectedly while someone is giving you head ??
Then again, Angel walks on the wild side…

he peeled Angel’s sweats off his body, dragging them out from under his ass as he tugged them down over his hips. Ang stirred a little at that, but then quieted.
god, is he hammered ?? I’d have woken up with the door opening !!

and while he was distracted, Liam allowed himself to look. hehe, he’s a voyeur !!

enjoying the way Angel moaned and strained at the cuffs in a manner that had nothing to do with escape. sweet !! I liked that part !!

He’d never done it to Angelus. Couldn’t imagine Gus allowing such a vulnerable thing, even cuffed. oh-oh, something’s in for angelus. You’re gonna make him bottom, I just know it...

Angel’s voice carried the weight of an aggravated parent, an impending threat clinging to the end of the sentence. Putting it off was only going to make things worse. wooooh, I know that one *cowers* You scared me there !!

Liam shuddered with a swell of uncertain emotion. Angel pressed a kiss to his skin. “Go to sleep, Lee. I’m not mad.” oooh, so sweet, and not so expected after all…
But now you’ve got me thinking, what could possibly happen next ?? Angel and Angelus aren’t gonna just kiss and make up like that… And if they’re both so possessive, what will Liam do ? He obviously completely needs both of them, and is so not gonna let angelus go, but still… ooooh, update soon, please please please !!!!

Completely great work again !!
(that got me late for my early classes, gr gr !!)

Date: 2007-03-13 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
I think Liam has been a bit of a slut up until now, and Angelus was sort of fine wtih that, but now that everything is falling more into place, he's bound to get more possessive. so the rules have changed, though I'm not sure Liam realizes it yet *cough*

what can I say, he's a heavy sleeper :)

haha yeah, and it was like a double layer of incestiness that was just wrong :P

I have plans
*steeples hands evilly*
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Date: 2007-03-16 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks! you know my boys are always together behind the scenes :)

I know, I was so glad he finally gave in ;)

glad you enjoyed it!

Yay!

Date: 2007-03-16 12:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarahthebloody.livejournal.com
Two new chapters since I last visited your lj. *happy*

Can I just say wow? That sex was so hot! Made me all tingly ;)

I love the way you have continued this story, it's so hot & sweet. It's not just sex, it's love! Aaaw... *pinches their cheeks*

And yaaay, Spike was mentioned! *giggle*

Can't wait for Angelus' return. I bet he will be both happy and jealous for them. and of course he'll want in on the steamy action!

Thanks for another two incredibly hot chapters! Yay for you! :D
*hugs*

Re: Yay!

Date: 2007-03-16 05:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
heee! yay for new chapters! I'm glad you enjoyed the sex ;) and the love, and all that other stuff, lol. I enjoy writing this fic very much.

of course! spangel exists in everything, didn't you know? lol.

Angelus' return should be interesting *shifty eyes*

*hugs back*

Umh...

Date: 2007-03-16 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarahthebloody.livejournal.com
I hope it's OK with you but I made a WP for this story. It's simple but I hope you like it anyway. *blush*

You can find it at my own lj.
http://pics.livejournal.com/sarahthebloody/pic/0001feg6

again: incredibly hor chapters! Hope you'll update it soon!

Re: Umh...

Date: 2007-03-16 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thank you so much! I love it! you're very sweet *hugs*

Re: Umh...

Date: 2007-03-18 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarahthebloody.livejournal.com
thanks. glad you liked it. *blush*

Date: 2007-04-15 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
If it was Angelus’ wrist he was slowly closing a handcuff around, he’d consider himself a dead man.

I actually laughed at this line, I think because all of a sudden I realized where this was going to go and I had to let out some of the anticipation.

Turns out Liam is smarter than either of his brothers give him credit for. And good for Angel for not turning on his brother again. Now to see what happenes with Angelus gets home.

Date: 2007-04-16 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
haha, yeah, poor Liam, everyone underestimates him. glad to give you a laugh :)

thanks for commenting on all these back-chapters individually, that was a real treat.

Date: 2007-04-16 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
No problem. I know how great I find it when someone discovers one of my WIPs and comments on every chapter. Plus, now I have further leverage when I feel the need to beg you for more ;)

Date: 2007-04-16 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
heeheee. I was gonna say when I replied to your ch 9 comment, I've been stuck on chapters 11 and 12 for months. I'm so glad you enjoyed the deliberate touches of canon, because that's the bitch of it right now, haha. trying to balance the fact that I want their interactions to *mean* something in a canon meta way with the requirements of the new context isn't always easy. I've rewritten the ending 3 different ways and while I know the key events that have to happen, none of the tones I've tried end up being right. *headdesk*

so that's why the ending could be a while coming :)

Date: 2007-04-16 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icemink.livejournal.com
I guess I'll just have to wait then. It's definately the meta aspects of this story that really make it work, and make it so much more than really hot smut.

Date: 2007-04-16 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
thanks babe :)

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